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Approved Starship Agitator-Class Super Heavy Battlecarrier | NIV Predator

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Marlon Sularen

Warlord of the Empire
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Extreme Armament | Can Rival Most Enemy Warships including Dreadnoughts thanks to it's heavy array of both special weapons and other exotic weapons
  • Durability | Can withstand Attacks from numerous enemies at once through it's Shield Leech Weapons , Shield Force Multipliers and advanced Three Layer Shielding System in addition to possessing a hull made out of Phkalt Metal which is invulnerable to energy weapons
  • Stealth Ship | Can slip in and out of entire Systems undetected due to it's Advanced Stealth Systems, also holding the ability to maintain it's stealth systems while firing on enemy ships
  • Gravity Well Projectors | Can Trap Entire Enemy Fleets within a System via it's Gravity Wells to gain the advantage on the Battlefield
  • Large Fighter Capacity | Can hold Thousands of Starfighters via it's large amount of Ventral and Side Hangars
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Mobility | Takes alot of time for the Ship to turn around.
  • Big Profile , Easy to Target | Can be easily targeted by Enemy Warships and Starfighter Squadrons due to it's sheer size
  • Exposed Engines | Has few weapons covering it's rear engines which can be easily targeted by enemy starfighters and warships.
  • Kinetic Weapons | Due to it's Phkalt Metal Hull, the Predator is vulnerable to kinetic weapons which unlike energy weapons can tear apart the mighty warship's hull.
SIGNIFICANT WEAKNESSES
  • Chain Reaction | If one of the five special weapons are severely damaged or destroyed while exposed , it could cause a Chain Reaction that would disable the other special weapons and deal considerable damage to the Predator as a result.
  • Exposed Ventral Bulb | The Large Ventral Bulb of the Predator, is the location of the Vessel's Main Reactors. While it's Destruction would not be fatal it would expose numerous "Breaches" that when targeted could cause severe damage to the Hull of the Warship

DESCRIPTION

The NIV Predator's origins can be traced back to three decades ago when it was first designed and built by the order of Marlon Sularen during the early days of the Third Imperial Civil War while he was in the service of the New Imperial Armada to serve as his flagship. Back then, Sularen had hoped to create a medium-sized powerful fleet centered around powerful and durable "Battlecarriers" which he could then use to enforce his will across the galaxy and eventually conquer his homeworld and regain power in the Core Worlds itself. As such the Predator would go on to serve in numerous conflict most notably the Third Imperial Civil War and the Second Great Hyperspace War with it's veteran crew of Officers and Enlisted Personnel now having decades of experience in addition to their great skills, further enhancing the Predator's effectiveness on the battle making it a dangerous warship to face on the battlefield.

Throughout the years, in order to ensure that it would maintain the upper hand against any warship that it would come across regardless of their size, the Predator has been subject to constant refits, to ensure that Sularen's mighty flagship would never suffer a defeat on the battlefield at the hands of the enemy and deliver victory wherever it went, making sure enemy fleets would be reduced to floating wreaks at the end of each battle. As part of the latest refits, the Predator has been equipped with more exotic weapons and technologies from around half a dozen corporations all thanks to Sularen's affiliation with the recently established Dark Empire, which has enabled Sularen to transform what was already a high quality warship into a state-of-the-art floating fortress with hundreds of powerful exotic weapons and defenses and various overlapping systems that would only further enable it to stay ahead of any ships it would come across.

Now, having established itself as a formidable force on the battlefield during the Third Imperial Civil War and the Second Great Hyperspace War, the NIV Predator is poised to once more prove it's strength as the Dark Empire launches it's campaign to subjugate the galaxy in an attempt to finish what Darth Solipsis started at Csilla. Having already survived encounters with larger fleets and larger warships such as Dreadnoughts, the NIV Predator days as a behemoth on the battlefield are far from number as there has yet been any vessel that has posed a significant threat to the mighty warship other then the larger Star Dreadnoughts, as it roams the battlefield almost unopposed. And as time progresses further, one can only guess how much stronger the Predator will become through future upgrades and retrofitting.

So to those who think they can challenge the Empire in Naval Combat

BEWARE THE PREDATOR

06/24/2021
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11/18/2021
  • Armaments [Slightly Modified]
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  • Standard & Advanced Systems [Completely Modified]
  • Description [Completely Modified]
  • Strengths & Weaknesses [Slightly Modified]
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05/30/2022
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03/10/2024
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Listib Hibin

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We have some problems.

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It is actually found Here. Please fix.

Superheavy Composite Beam Turbolaser [x5]
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This is considered a Superweapon on Wookieepedia and is agreed on by the Factory Judges that it is a Superweapon. Remove it please.


  • Hangar Space: Very High [48 Squadrons]
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 40 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 8 squadrons
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5000m [Base: 5 | Very Low: 12 | Low: 20 | Average: 28 | High: 35 | Very High: 42 | Extreme: 50]
This is wrong. At Very High, you have 42 Squadrons. Please rework this.


  • Manufacturer: SularenCo
  • Affiliation:
    • Marlon Sularen
    • SularenCo
    • New Imperial Order
    • Vicondor Union
Materials:
  • Reinforced Impervium Hull and Frame
  • Duralium Inner Plating
  • Molded Duraplast Interior
  • Doonium outer plating
  • Transparisteel Viewports
  • Carbon Coating
  • Strategic Stygium Crystal incorporation

Armaments:
  • Proton Torpedos
  • Brilliant Missiles
  • Disruptor Torpedoes
  • Mag-Pulse Warheads
  • Broadside Flak Guns
  • Broadside Mass Drivers
  • Null-Burst Projectors
  • Shield-Disrupting Projectors
Defeneces:
  • Thermal Shield
  • Ion Shielding
  • Particle Shielding
  • Molecular Shielding
  • Electronic Countermeasures
  • Cap Drain
  • Missile Deactivation Transmitter
Special Features:
  • Stygium Cloaking Device
  • HIMS
  • Gravity-Well Projector [x2]
  • Enhanced Shield Disrupting Projector [x4]
  • Anti-Ion Emission Tracers
  • Electronic Counter Measures
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These all need links. Every single one of them in bold.


Let me know when you have done this and notify me and we can move forward.
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
 
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Listib Hibin

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Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

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Link is broken. Please fix.

Also I forgot to bring this up last time. Hopefully this is it afterwards as well. The Proton Beam Cannon, can you describe perhaps how it would work? I know you have three but we need to know how damaging it is. I talked to the Factory Team and we just want to know somewhere how it would work...even in descriptions.

Let me know when you work on this. We are almost there!
 
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Marlon Sularen

Warlord of the Empire
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