Feedback Alana's 300 post checkpoint

[Alana Calloway]

From what I can tell, Alana has hit 300 posts in the last month I have been writing her, and I'm just checking what the vibes are for the character. I've enjoyed writing with everyone, but I'm curious about feedback in regards to her character, my writing abilities, or where I am going with the character. All comments are appreciated.

 

[Everest Vale]

Alana is a really fascinating character honestly. She's so conflicted and complex, and for good reason I'd say. I don't know all of her story but every time I realise something new I'm like 'whoa'. In general though, your posts are great. Really enjoy the observational details and language you use in your writing. Really excited to see where her tale goes