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Approved NPC Aldera Royal Guard

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[SIZE=12pt]Name: Aldera Royal Guard[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Intent: Protection for the Royal family of Aldera[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Affiliation: House Organa[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Availability: Unique. This unit will have members to accompany any of the royal family on official trips. The unit will also be present on Aldera to protect the Palace. This unit is unique to Aldera, and to House Organa. They are patterned after the Alderaan Royal Guard that House Organa also has sovereignty over. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Quality: Veteran[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Type: Infantry[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Strength: Trained It is a compliment of 100 guardsman, 4 Lieutenants, and 1 Captain of the Guard.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Description: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Once Arianna Organa was made Queen of Aldera it became important to establish protection for her and the royal family. This Unit fills that needs. T[/SIZE]here is one Captain of the Guard, Captain Lindsey who was trained by [member="Marcello Matteo"] on Alderaan. He is considered Elite. He oversees the training, and well-being of all members of the Guard.

[SIZE=12pt]The Royal Guard is comprised of [/SIZE]100 guardsman, 4 Lieutenants, and 1 Captain of the Guard. Individuals volunteer to serve, and are then put through a rigorous testing to challenge their physical fitness, and their mental acuity. The guard accompanies the Queen, or her family, on vacations, diplomatic missions, and social occasions. Their second responsibility is to guard the palace grounds, and thirdly the Aldera Crown Jewels. The guardsmen rotate through each of these duties, and then are given time off.

They wear this armor --- a gift from [member="Draco Vereen"] Knight-Errant of Aldera. Armor was given as gift here.

They are supplied blasters, and blaster rifles - Blaster or rifle, depending upon duty being performed

And for ceremonial purposes they will soon be outfitted with phridium swords.


[SIZE=12pt]Links: Why does it Sparkle So[/SIZE]
 
[member="Faith Balor-Organa"]



Faith Balor-Organa said:
Links: Why does it Sparkle So
The link does not work. This happens when the "[ url=][ /url]" is in a different font than the link, which is probably what happened here. I'm guessing you changed the font of the submission but copy-pasted the link afterwards. Make sure they're the same and try again.



Faith Balor-Organa said:
Quality:There is one Captain of the Guard, Captain Lindsey who was trained by Marcello Matteo on Alderaan. He is considered Elite. He oversees the training, and well-being of all members of the Guard. There are 4 Lieutenants who are considered Veteran who work with 4 platoons of 25 guards who are trained.
This deserves a mention, but fits better under "Description". Please move and replace with a quality rating. The possible ratings from highest to lowest are: A - Elite, B - Veteran, C - Trained, D - Untrained and E - Rabble. If the unit itself, with the exception of officers, count as "trained", the appropriate rating would be C.



Faith Balor-Organa said:
Description: Once Arianna Organa was made Queen of Aldera it became important to establish protection for her and the royal family. This Unit fills that needs.
I want to see you turn this into a full paragraph. How are they recruited and trained? Any unique tactics or fighting styles? What kind of scenarios can you expect to see these present in? Etc.

I will also need to see what kind of equipment they use added, as well as links to weapons and armour.

Thanks
 
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The armor you have denoted here is listed as a restricted market. Please provide a thread where this armor was gifted to you for use for this particular NPC unit.
 
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