Approved Tech Aloy's Beskar'gam: Reforged

[Aloy Vizsla]

"It has seen action, But it can be reforged."
—The Quartermaster​

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To sub Aloy's reforged beskar'gam
• Image Source: Armor(Top) w\Edits by Aloy Vizsla | Helmet w\ edits by Aloy Vizsla | Gunship | edits | Backplate\Breastplate w\ edits by Aloy Vizsla | Knee pads | Gauntlets(Vambraces\Knuckle plates) w\ edits by | Bullets(swtor icons) | Divider: Aloy Vizsla
  
  
• Canon Link: Mandalorian Armor \\ Nite Owl Helmet
• Permissions:
  Spoiler: Screenshot

  
• Primary Source: Mandalorian Armor \\ Boba Fett's arsenal \\

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Quartermaster
• Affiliation: Aloy Vizsla
• Model: Beskar'gam
• Modularity: Internal software \\ Cloaks\Capes \\ Undersuits\Flightsuits \\ Flak vests \\ Gauntlets \\ Holsters\Utilities \\ Footwear \\ Paint schemes \\
• Production: Unique
• Material: Pure Beskar (Plates\Outer helmet) \\ Transparisteel(Visor) \\ Duraplast(Helm internals) \\ Electrical components \\

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight: Heavy
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Extreme
  • Kinetic: High
  • Lightsabers: Extreme
  • Other:
    -EMP\Ion: Average
    -Electric: None
    -Cold: None
    -Heat: High
    -Acid: Very High
    -Sonic: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

Aloy Vizsa's "Nite Owl" Armor​

Aloy Vizsla's Cuirass​

Aloy Vizsla's custom gauntlets​

Aloy's Knee pads w\ Knee mounted rocket-darts​

• Helmet: A standard Nite Owl pattern mandalorian helmet made from pure beskar. The helm has been painted Blue in mimicry of the ancient clone wars era Vizslas and features white trim around the visor to enhance the almost skeletal features of the helmet, Sharp teeth-like markings along the cheek plates that resemble the teeth painted on republic gunships, And a single white handprint on the helm's forehead, Leftover symbolism from her time as the right hand woman of Darsch Vizsla .
  
  Helmet Features:
  -Duraplast protected electrical components including; Onboard computer seamlessly linked to Aloy's Cybernetic control module, IFF Transponder, and GPS.
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  -Transparisteel \ Flash guard visor w\ Thermal vision \ Night-vision visor \ Photo Amplifier(x100 zoom)\Holo\Vid recording add on.
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  -Rangefinder antenna w\Scan Pulse HUD tracks up to 30 targets up to 10ft range even through walls for up to 60 seconds or upon target leaving scanner range. Scan pulse functionality requires a 2 minute "Reboot" period after scan period ends. The rangefinder is capable of tracking up to one target in line of sight up to extreme range, Which functions as a lock-on guidance system for guided weaponry linked to the HUD itself.
  Includes Environmental scanner, Electromagnetic Scanner.
  -Broadband antenna w\ Bio-hexacrypt\Encrypted comlink and Ion-scrambler
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  -Built in Vocal enhancer w\ Ubese Speech Scrambler(toggled on\off) scrambles proximity speech while keeping electrical communication clean.
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  -Built in Rebreather w\ 2 hour oxygen supply.
  
  
  
• Cuirass: A standard mandalorian breastplate constructed in "Post Imperial" style. The underside is lined with several inertial dampeners designed to slow the impact of slug based weaponry, While the outer face features a single solid plate of beskar with a name display\chaincode display tab on one side and the vizsla flowered branch painted on the other. The rest was painted blue like the helm while the connected tassets remain unpainted and worn.
  
  -Backplate w\ magnetic jetpack\weapon mount
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  -Onboard temperature regulator
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  - 1 inch thick Beskar Breastplate\Backplate w\ electric name tag\chaincode display
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  -Aloy's signet (Gurreck) embossed into connected pauldrons
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  - Built in Inertial dampeners reduce kinetic damage
  
  
• Gauntlets: A set of custom mandalorian gauntlets designed by Aloy herself in "Post Imperial" style with some personal modifications. Both gauntlets feature glowing red knuckle-plate vibroblades, While the left-hand gauntlet features her own custom wrist blades, Designed to deploy and catch melee weapons when struck. Even lightsabers.
  
  - Holoprojector(Right).
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  -Beskar retractable wrist blades w\swordbreaker function(closes around\traps bladed weaponry)(Left)
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  -Gauntlet weaponry: Mini-flamethrower(Right), Whipcord launcher(Right), (x2)Knuckle-plate vibro blade(s), , Fex-M3 laced Whistling Birds(capable of tracking up to x10 targets[Kinetic\toxin damage])(Left), Retractable wrist blades(Left).
  
  
  
• Legs: A set of asymmetrical leg armor in mandalorian style. Features two knee pads, One of which is armed with deadly rocket-darts, And a single shin guard on the left to protect her organic leg, While the right-hand shin guard is missing in order to make room for her prosthetic leg.
  -(x2)Fex-M3 laced Knee mounted Rocket-darts(Kinetic\Toxin damage. Range: 25 meters[Right knee pad])
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  -Magno-grip boot
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  -Thigh plates w\ magnetic weapon mounts

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STRENGTHS

• "Sacred Metal" The thicc Beskar plating offers incredible resistance energy weapons, acid and even lightsabers, Absorbing energy damage with ease and stopping lightsabers in their tracks for a time.
  
  
  
• "Ionic entanglements" The duraplast internal construction prevents ionic or EMP based damage from affecting the helmet's electrical suite.
  
  
  
• "Swordbreaker" The custom wrist blades are made of lightsaber resistant beskar and designed to close around and ensnare blades or even lightsabers on contact utilizing a series of motors that prompt the blades to curve inward on the gauntlet and around bladed weaponry. Once ready to release, The blades will return to their natural position(as seen in gauntlet ref above) and may be retracted into the gauntlet itself or utilized in melee as needed.

WEAKNESSES

• "The quick or the Dead" As with most mandalorian armor, Aloy's features many gaps. Most notably are the frontal thighs, Sides and upper arms.
  
  
  
• "Ionic entanglements" Though the helm may be immune to the effects of EMP and Ionic weaponry, The gauntlet weaponry is not, And can be shut down for the remainder of a battle if struck.
  
  
  
• "Heavy handed" The beskar plates are heavy, Making it impossible to swim without aid.

DESCRIPTION
A highly customized set of post-imperial mandalorian armor in "Nite Owl" style, Reforged by The Quartermaster for Aloy after suffering extensive damage during the liberation of wayland, Aloy trusting her and only her to reforge her broken armor to her exact specifications, And to make her armor better than ever before. Her Beskar plates were reforged from the original set, Made from beskar gifted to Aloy by none other than her longtime partner, Darsch Vizsla , While the internal electronics were forged from Duraplast taken from the walls of The Cin'vode, Her birthplace on Concordia. The helm was melted down entirely and recast as a "Nite Owl Helmet" and then painted Blue with white trim in mimicry of ancient clone wars era Vizsla armor, With the addition of painted teeth on the cheek plates, Resembling the markings of republic starfighters and denoting her passion for fighting while airborne with her jetpack. The white handprint on the dome of her helm represents her initial role as right hand woman of the previous Alor, Darsch Vizsla, A simple and nostalgic time that Aloy misses dearly.
Her breastplate was reforged to more closely resemble traditional mandalorian armor of the imperial-era and to better fit her feminine physique while still offering adequate protection and her backplate was altered to better accommodate her jetpack gifted to her by Cynthia Solus . Her gauntlets were then heavily modified to include whistling birds and a specialized wrist blade of her own design. After the reforging process, She was gifted a Signet by the Quartermaster in the form of a Gurreck for her valiant hunt on Endor beside her Adoptive mother, River Kryze , Which she was honored to accept. With her armor reforged to her liking and her signet revealed, Aloy was once again ready to take on the trials of the mandalore way and leadership of House Vizsla of Roon.

 

[Noah Corek]

Aloy Vizsla

Under Review.

 

[Noah Corek]

Aloy Vizsla

Love me a good set of 'gam, everything checks out! Pending Approval!

John Locke

 

[John Locke]

Aloy Vizsla | Noah Corek

There are a few issues that jump out at me that I'd like to bring to your attention before we move forward with this submission.

1) Images

Where are the images you're using as bullets from your strengths and weaknesses from? Although you have provides sources for the other images in the submission you will also need to provide a source for these images.​

2) Permissions

I noticed that you used The Quartermaster as the manufacturer of this submission, please provide proof of permission from the writer to use their character in this way.​

3) Ratings

Currently, your ratings are as below.​

Source	Positive	Negative
Production: Unique	4	0
Weight: Heavy	1	0
Energy: Extreme	0	3
Kinetic: High	0	1
Lightsabers: Extreme	0	3
EMP\Ion: Average	0	0
Electric: None	3	0
Cold: Average	0	0
Heat: High	0	1
Acid: Very High	0	2
Sonic: Average	0	0
Total:	8	10

As you can see, you are 2 ratings overpowered, if you could please lower the ratings by 2 to balance them.​

4) Strengths

Beskar - Beskar doesn't generally reflect blaster bolts in the manner that Ultrachrome does, instead it's tough enough to just absorb the damage. Could you please clear up your wording to prevent future misunderstandings.​

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Swordbreaker - How exactly does this work? Are the blades segmented to allow them to bend and wrap around your opponent's blades?​

Please look through my notes and tag me back when you have made any necessary changes.

 

[The Quartermaster]

John Locke

Aloy has my permission to use this character in this submission.

Does that work?

 

[John Locke]

The Quartermaster

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[Aloy Vizsla]

John Locke Got a screenshot denoting permission to use The Quartermaster as a manufacturer. I've lowered sonic, electric and cold resistances to none, and I've clarified the strengths, Hope that will suffice

 

[Aloy Vizsla]

John Locke figured I'd try again now that the factory's open. I also swapped some images around, Hope it all checks out

 

[John Locke]

Aloy Vizsla

That looks really good, thank you for making those changes. There is just one thing that jumps out at me now.

• "Swordbreaker" The custom wrist blades are made of lightsaber proof beskar and designed to close around and ensnare blades or even lightsabers on contact utilizing a series of motors that prompt the blades to curve inward on the gauntlet and around blades weaponry. Once ready to release, The blades will return to their natural position(as seen in gauntlet ref above) and may be retracted into the gauntlet itself or utilized in melee as needed.

We try to avoid absolute language in the factory because nothing is absolutely resistant to anything, given enough time even the weakest weapon can wear down the most powerful armour. Could you please change the wording "lightsaber proof" to "extremely lightsaber resistant" or words to that effect?

This is just a recommendation, and if you wish to have the sub approved in its current state I will do so.

 

[Aloy Vizsla]

John Locke Hey locke! Sounds reasonable enough so I've changed the wording to simply "Lightsaber resistant" and I've also changed up a few descriptive notes removing Aloy's connection to the nite owls for IC reasons.

Thanks for the help and feedback <3

 

[John Locke]

Aloy Vizsla

My pleasure. Thank you for working with me.

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