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Approved NPC Anastasia Graves

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION:
  • Intent: To expand Lorale's family tree and list of allies
  • Image Credit: (X)
  • Role: The First Daughter of Lorale
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Lorale Farmar, The Scarlet Breed
  • Changes Made: New Photo/Appearance, Nicknames, Personality, Weapons of Choice, removal of a weakness that no longer matches her character, expansion of an existing weakness (No Special Gear), and the changing of an existing strength (Backup Commander).
PHYSICAL INFORMATION:
  • Age: 40
  • Force Sensitivity: Sith Master
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance: Following the effective launch of the Order Ascendant and the reformation of The Vortex Spawn into The Scarlet Breed, Anastasia Graves has fully accepted her newfound Sith status and has thus made significant changes to her once simplistic appearance. Receiving genetic modifications from Kascalion Giedfield to restructure her physicality, Anastasia Graves has emerged with the appearance befitting a proper lady of the Sith, adorned in an armored red-black leather outfit complete with a decorated half-cape. Her eyes, once hazel and full of subdued emotions, now blaze with an emotional emerald green that contrasts strikingly against her dark hair and contemplative expressions.
SOCIAL INFORMATION:
  • Name: Anastasia Graves; The First Daughter; Sugar (Pet Name by Alrekur)
  • Loyalties: Lorale Farmar, The Sith Empire, The Scarlet Breed
  • Wealth: Wealthy - As the first daughter of Lorale Farmar, Anastasia possesses access to almost everything the Wolf of Noxis owns save for the most classified assets.
  • Notable Possessions: Custom Leather Outfit; Double-Bladed Sith Dagger; Curved Lightsaber
  • Skills: Military Commander; Duelist
  • Personality: Compared to her past self, Anastasia's new personality is Night and Day. Where she was once subdued and overtly professional to appease her adoptive father and avoid the less pleasant factors of the Dark Side, she has now fully submitted to the power on the request of Lorale who seeks to achieve his goals with ferocity and a tempest fury. Approaching life with a much more sarcastic and somewhat sadistic attitude, with hints of debaucherous indulgence, Anastasia Graves aims to live up to both the expectations of being the First Daughter of Lorale Farmar and as a Sith Lord.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Weapon of Choice: As a Sith Lord specialized in both Makashi and Niman, Anastasia is capable of utilizing a Lightsaber and the Force with great proficiency and has proven to have mastered many attack patterns from both Lightsaber Forms.
  • Combat Function: While her main focus in combat is commanding the forces under her control, Anastasia does possess a great deal of expertise in combat and is capable of having prolonged duels with opponents of equal skill. Additionally, while her skill in commanding forces is naturally nowhere near the level of her master, she is still able to lead the innumerable soldiers under her control with ease and confidence and leads them to victory time and time again.
STRENGTHS:
  • Backup Commander: Anastasia's greatest skill is her ability to command the massive military might of Lorale Farmar's infantry in the absence of his main battlefield commander, directing the infantry division with ease and intelligence. When the time calls for it, she serves as the emergency director of warfare with the utmost dedication, unwavering in her duties and never balking or falling under pressure.
  • Duelist Skills: Anastasia's greatest second best skill is her duelist abilities, trained to her personally by her Father after being saved from Korriban some decades ago. Utilizing an expert mixture of Niman and Makashi, Anastasia is capable of hanging with the best of them for some time before retreating back into the ranks of her forces to resume command.
  • Favored Daughter: As the first daughter, and thus favored daughter, of Lorale Farmar, Anastasia has access to almost all assets the Wolf of Noxis owns, including those created by Lorale's doting sibling, Kascalion.
WEAKNESSES:
  • Multiple Enemies: Anastasia is quite horrible at dueling multiple enemies, having been trained to deal with at most two. This makes it so that if she is caught behind enemy lines for whatever reason, or if a strike team of incredible skill manage to reach her, she will struggle to survive, often requiring saving from her fellow Vortex Spawn.
  • No Special Gear: Anastasia does not possess any type of gear that would improve her abilities or provide incredible protection. As such, she is highly vulnerable to even the most basic of attacks should she be caught unaware or facing an opponent beyond her skills.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION:
Born upon the political world of Alderaan, Anastasia was once the beloved daughter of Lord Costus of House Olbu, a relatively small royal family that had finally gained land beyond their estate. Discovered to have been Force Sensitive around her fifth birthday, Anastasia was destined to be sent to the Jedi to train and become a warrior of light.

Until the Sith's corruption spread.

What happened exactly to the shuttle escorting Anastasia, or rather what happened to the other passengers is unknown. What is known is that Anastasia was captured by the Empire and sent to Korriban to become Sith. Her training upon the planet was arduous and dangerous due to her inherent light and desires to return home. How she survived long enough to be rescued by the Wolf of Noxis is yet another mystery.

Descending upon the planet to find a new member of the then Vortex Spawn, Lorale encountered the young Anastasia, only fifteen years old at the time. Sensing her potential in the Force as well as her conflict between the Light and Dark, and after witnessing her in a sparring session against another Acolyte, Lorale chose her as his new apprentice. Anastasia's Overseer, however, explicitly refused, citing that she wasn't ready nor worthy of such a position.

The Overseer would never leave his office alive again, his head swiftly removed by Anastasia who ignited her lightsaber and struck him down in a fit of emotions, taking the opportunity to be able to leave the wretched planet and escape back to her home. Unbeknownst to her, Lorale had predicted this and subsequently took precautionary measures, resulting in Anastasia never desiring to return home again.

Since that day, Anastasia has trained and served and lead under the guidance of the Wolf of Noxis who would appoint her as the emergency commander of his military forces that would soon be revealed to aid the Empire in the coming wars. She would also take on the last name of Graves, finally shedding her connection to her birth family and embracing her newfound place in the Dark Side and the Sith.
 
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Lorale Farmar said:
Notable Possessions: Sith Armor; former Overseer's Lightsaber.
Is there anything noteworthy about this armour? Or is it just generic armour? If it's the former, please describe briefly. If there's a Factory sub or a Wookieepedia entry, please hyperlink.



Lorale Farmar said:
Force Sensitivity: Sith Lord
Please pick a rank from the Codex NPC template. The equivalent of Sith Lord would be Master.
  • Force Sensitivity: [ Choose from: Force Dead, Non-Force User, Untrained Force Sensitive, Apprentice/Padawan, Knight, Master. ]
[member="Lorale Farmar"]
 
[member="Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori"] Changed the rank and added the keyword "Generic" to the armor. There's nothing special. It's just regular Sith gear. Same with the lightsaber. I wanted one of my npcs to just be a normal Sith more or less.
 
Submission moved to pre-codex as per writer's request.

Please remember to include a list of changes when you tag a member of codex staff to move the submission back into live judgement.
 
BobertEZ BobertEZ

Hello again. As mentioned, could you please include a list of changes made in this submission (e.g. fixed links, updated to new codex, updated [insert section] etc.)? You can do that in your response to my review post or just go back and put it in the submission.

That aside, now on to the review itself.
  • Force Sensitivity: Sith Lord
Please pick a rank from the Codex NPC template. The equivalent of Sith Lord would be Master.
  • Force Sensitivity: [ Choose from: Force Dead, Non-Force User, Untrained Force Sensitive, Apprentice/Padawan, Knight, Master. ]

Since she is a Master, if she any Force powers of note, please list them. This isn't necessary if it's very standard, baseline stuff.
 
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Elpsis Kerrigan Elpsis Kerrigan Changes Made section added. Further changes I did was fixing the links and updating to current codex. And she doesn't have any powers of note really. Just standard telekinesis and such. She's mostly a Sith Master by way of dueling prowess and nepotism.
 
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