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Approved NPC Angelo Montagna

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]To create a Pit Boss NPC for The Crown Prime Casino to act as the legitimate face of the business[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]​Image Credit:
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    [SIZE=9pt]https://www.thefashi...oot-haute-time/[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Role:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Pit Boss/Head of Operations[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Links: The Crown Prime Casino[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PHYSICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Age: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]30[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Force Sensitivity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Non-Force User[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Species:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Human[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Appearance: (As Per Photo) [/SIZE]

    SOCIAL INFORMATION

  • [SIZE=9pt]Name:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Angelo Montagna[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Loyalties: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]The Family[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wealth:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Angelo’s personal business investments are centered around the Casino’s legitimate earnings - he does not accept elicit funds, and is a paid employee of the Casino’s Corporate Staff. As such, he is not overtly wealthy; many of his daily expenses are covered, and the man only pays for his own luxuries. He has a fine selection of Men’s fashionable Apparel, drives a luxury vehicle, and spends his time nearby in a Company-Owned Apartment. He rarely leaves, and is never far from the Casino.[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=9pt]Notable Possessions:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Signet Ring, Family Heirloom; Fine Suits & Wrist-chrons; Luxury Speeder; Fine Wine Selection[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=9pt]Skills: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Business Acumen, Public Relations Expert, Law background (Focus in gambling & business), Natural Leader, Boxer, Intimidator [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=9pt]Personality:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Angelo is typically rather stoic, offering little humor during daily business. He's a bit of a micromanager, conducting the Casino's affairs with militant precision. He is discrete, avoids involving himself directly in elicit activities, and might become quite angry if things do not go his way.

    The Pit Boss also has a serious anger management issue; he will likely not become violent toward employees, but many of them are threatened by a simmering violence just beneath the surface. He personally takes responsibility for giving cheaters a "Once-Over". [/SIZE]


    COMBAT INFORMATION

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weapon of Choice: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]His Hands[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Combat Function: May engage any cheaters in physical violence once they've been secured by Security in a hidden area within The Labyrinth. Will become aggressive on the casino floor to assist Security in removing drunks or disturbers of the peace.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Strengths: Professional Boxer, Bob & Weave, Blunt Weapons Fighter[/SIZE]

  • Weaknesses: No Guns, You wouldn't like me when I'm angry...


  • [SIZE=9pt]HISTORICAL INFORMATION
    Angelo has lived on Coruscant all his life. He originally had a promising career in Public Relations within Coruscant's CSB, but discovered he could make more money in Law; he obtained a higher education with a focus in Business then graduated into Law as it related to the Gambling Industry on Coruscant.

    He is originally an acquaintance of Ivory Stroud's, and the two have some kind of prior history - Angelo was chosen to run The Crown Prime Casino as the Family's legitimate face.

    He has been involved in organized crime throughout his life, but famously never gets his hands dirty.
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[member="Ivory Stroud"]

Everything looks just about good to go here, I like this NPC submission. :)

I just have one comment, regarding your combat function section. It is usually recommended that if an NPC has a chance of being used in combat threads that submitters include some relevant strengths and weaknesses. I can stamp what you've got here, but under the assumption that this character wouldn't be super effective in situations like gunfights. It's up to you.
 

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[member="Zark"] Thank you, Zark =D I'm glad you like it!

I will edit some strengths & weaknesses in; I don't intend on using Angelo for combat other than the occasional back-room roughing up. I'll get those done and submit them! <3
 

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[member="Zark"]

Hi there =) I just added a few strengths & weaknesses.. if you'd like anything else, such as a description of each, I can edit that in. He's not really a gunman - more a brawler. That's why we've got Security! Hahaha
 
[member="Ivory Stroud"]

Looks solid to me. I should note that this was meant as a recommendation more than an ultimatum, the submission was fine as is but now he's a real live fleshed out combat NPC. Enjoy your new muscley man!

Pending Secondary Approval

[member="Allyson Locke"] | [member="Zeradias Mant"] | [member="Irajah Ven"] | [member="Samka Derith"]
 
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