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 Another "Why not?" Feedback

I personally like the arc that you've got Connel on. I like how he started out as just a vibrant young man who was living in the shadow of his father and then he took on a life of his own with some hardships and a new path. I also know you've got some exciting things going on with the new Shadow Temple and thats going to deepen his growth too. Personally I enjoy the character.
 
Spitfire Soul, Heart of Gold
Once I have more time, I would love to have more threads with both Connel and Caltin!

I know a little more about Caltin than I do Connel from who Azzie has interacted with more, but I've read the bio and gone through some of the older threads. Connel is such a strong willed and interesting multifaceted character. He's whitty (Jury's out on whether intentionally or not as of right now), but also clearly takes no crap, and I love that. Honestly, your writing is always amazing! It's an inspiration to me to see all you've contributed here and I love reading your posts when I see them.

The only thing I could really say in the way of constructive criticism is that the formatting of your posts took a bit of getting used to for me. That's not to say it isn't good, in fact it works really well for the characters so I'm not suggesting anything be done differently really. Nor does it bother me. It was just something I had to get used to.

I look forward to seeing more of them as in the future and how the story moves along for you! Hopefully I will be able to have better constructive feedback for you when next you post that isn't just mostly compliments xD
 

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