Well-Known Member
Okay, so I did this a little while ago, and it's almost July, which means it'll be another round of novel writing in Camp Nanowrimo.
But before I do any of that, I need more opinions about my book! I've already had one person beta read, but I need a larger variety of readers to truly gauge how well I did, so I can do even better during July. Something to encourage you, is that my initial beta reader (who is a fellow writer and RP's like us), loved it!
The essential premise of the story, follows our protagonist "Conscript" 4-4-4-4, who is a soldier created by a civilization at the end of time, prior to the demise of the universe to the Time Storm, a reality ripping massive paradox. The civilization (which is in the twilight between an unending void of dead stars and the Time Storm), believes that they have found the source of the storm, Subject Delta, and wish to eliminate it to reverse the Time Storm, and allow civilization to continue for billions more years to come. So soldiers like Conscript, are scattered like leaves in the wind all throughout time and space on a suicide mission to find Subject Delta and eliminate it. They have to follow a set of seven mandates however, in order to prevent further paradox damage to the universe, that if not followed correctly will result in either homicide, voluntary suicide, or involuntary suicide. How will Conscript survive?
But before I do any of that, I need more opinions about my book! I've already had one person beta read, but I need a larger variety of readers to truly gauge how well I did, so I can do even better during July. Something to encourage you, is that my initial beta reader (who is a fellow writer and RP's like us), loved it!
The essential premise of the story, follows our protagonist "Conscript" 4-4-4-4, who is a soldier created by a civilization at the end of time, prior to the demise of the universe to the Time Storm, a reality ripping massive paradox. The civilization (which is in the twilight between an unending void of dead stars and the Time Storm), believes that they have found the source of the storm, Subject Delta, and wish to eliminate it to reverse the Time Storm, and allow civilization to continue for billions more years to come. So soldiers like Conscript, are scattered like leaves in the wind all throughout time and space on a suicide mission to find Subject Delta and eliminate it. They have to follow a set of seven mandates however, in order to prevent further paradox damage to the universe, that if not followed correctly will result in either homicide, voluntary suicide, or involuntary suicide. How will Conscript survive?
