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Approved NPC Arizelva Nintros [NPC]

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Ravenous

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OOC Information
  • Intent: To give Ravenous a close friend and ally in both combat and daily life
  • Image Credit: All wrapped up
  • Role: Ravenous's second in command. His personal advisor protector and even though he'd never admit it Arizelva is indeed his closest (and only) friend
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Arizelva is in this thread I hadn't yet decided whether or not to make her an actual NPC at the time so I hope this doesn't complicate things too much
Physical Information
  • Age: 30 standard years
  • Force sensitivity: Non-Force user
  • Species: Togruta
  • Appearance
    • Height: 5ft 7in
    • Weight: 123 pounds
    • Eye color: Emerald
    • Hair: N/A
    • Skin color: Orange and white
    • Distinguishing features: A Lightsaber wound on her back
Social Information
  • Name: Arizelva Nintros
    • Alias: Hot chick, Pestilent noisy little imp
  • Loyalties: Intrepid Inc
  • Wealth: Moderate as she is paid by Ravenous and intrepid Inc
  • Notable possessions: A head broach gifted to Arizelva by her mother
  • Skills: Scouting specialist with solid knowledge of the underworld and a repertoire of different hacks and other methods of slicing
  • Personality: Spiteful and easily annoyed Arizelva takes any and every opportunity to test Ravenous's patience (Even if it never ends well) For all her flaws Arizelva is a loyal friend who will stick by you in tough times and even though she might not show it at the heart of her rigid exterior is a heart that just wants to be happy
Combat Information
  • Weapon of choice: Twin RSKF-44 Heavy Blaster pistols
  • Combat function: In combat Arizelva will typically fall back and play a support role while Ravenous or someone better suited for combat takes the lead. Arizelva will often resort to flanking her opponent using suppressive fire or even explosives if need be to both confuse and box in her adversaries...With back up of course. At heart, Arizelva is a slicer so most of the time while on a mission she will try and find a way to use her technical know-how to her advantage
Strengths
  • Survival instincts: Unlike most people, Arizelva knows when to quit
  • Street smarts: Arizelva spent most of her life on the streets so she knows how to stay out of danger
  • Experienced slicer: Arizelva is no stranger to the technical landscape
  • Loyalty: She may not show it but Arizelva is a true friend
Weaknesses
  • Coward: Arizelva is many things among them she is a coward
  • Stupid: Arizelva was never cognitively inclined
  • Liability: While she is an important asset keeping her alive in battle can often be a hassle
Historical Information
  • Back when Ravenous and the rest of Intrepid Inc began setting up operations on the planet Kriselist he managed to turn a large portion of the criminal underworld to his cause those who didn't join him were either completely outclassed by the success of his newfound criminal empire or sought to bring it tumbling down. Arizelva was one of these fiends. At the time of Ravenous's rise to power Arizelva was running a band of hackers and slicers who used special algorithms to hack into banks, government files you name it. When they saw an opportunity to steal files from a war manufacturer they couldn't resist so they devised a plan to infiltrate Intrepid industries under the cover of night. Their malintent was apparent to Ravenous's abilities in the Force which bade him investigate the disturbance he sensed and sure enough he found the crew of misfits plugged into a terminal surrounded by dead guardsmen. The Dark Jedi effortlessly cut the group down leaving only sobbing and pleading Arizelva with a nasty slash to her back and electrical burns lacerating her body. Out of respect for her cunning in infiltrating his base and pity for her sorrowful beg for mercy Ravenous allowed Arizelva to live in exchange for her services.
 
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I'll be conducting this review for you. Before we begin, there is one issue that I see with this submission.


That's a link to a Tumblr search string, not a link that supplies any kind of credit for the original artist. Here is an article that can help you with properly sourcing and crediting images for future submissions.

In this case, the image that you have selected is by tulomnedraws. Having found the original artist, however, is where the issue emerges.

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On the left hand side of the artist's Tumblr page are the words: Please do not repost my art.

The Codex Rules provide that original creators of works should have their wishes respected. As such, I'm asking you to please select a different image for this submission.

Over to you for how you'd like to proceed. Please tag me when you have completed any edits.
 
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