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Armor of Doom

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Katana

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  • Intent: Create an Armor for Story Purposes that will provide a unique narrative for Katana.
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Force Armor
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: High
    • Kinetic: High
    • Lightsabers: High
    • Mind based Force Powers: Extreme
    • Force Light: None
    • Acid: High
    • Non Mind Force Powers: High
    • Head Shots: None
    • Heat: (Weapons wise) Low
    • Cold: (Weapons wise) Low
    • Environmental Heat / Cold: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Returns to User Unharmed: The key attribute of the user is whatever they do to get rid of it, the armor will always return unharmed to their possession.
  • Mind Protection: Any and all attempts to use any forms of Telepathic Attacks will be met with a sort of "Backlash" as well as a surge of pain. This is in addition to being blocked.
  • Environmental Protection: Modifications Katana did to the armor with the Force have provided it a protection against a wide range of hostile environments. They have also made it to where the individual won't sweat when inside the armor. This also provides them protection against the Vacuum of Space, and Solar Radiation, but not radiation based weapons.
  • Adapts to Fit: It adapts to fit the body of the wielder.
WEAKNESSES
  • Born to Annoy: The constant returning to the user no matter what they do can likely cause some irritation to them as they will have attempted to get rid of it.
  • Aura of Aggravation: The Armor produces a "Force Aura" that aggravates the wearer, making it easier to irritate them and goad them to attack people.
  • Force Light: Force Light would be effective, as the armor is made with the Dark Side of the Force. It can destroy the armor.
  • Twisting the Morality: Wearing the armor has a psychological effect on the user - it twists them to the Dark Side of the Force. The longer they wear the armor, the more it twists them.
  • Dark Side: The armor is a beacon of the Dark Side, and would essentially say to Jedi "He's a Sith, He's a Sith, Kick his ass."
  • Cook Inside: Radiation based weapons could cook the user inside.
  • Truly Intense Heat would be effective.
  • Truly intense cold would be effective.
  • Intensifying the Gravity on the user would be effective.
  • Melting: Melting will work after a point
  • High Pressure Oceans: It's not good for swimming in, and would sink like a stone.
  • Giving it away: Regifting the armor frees the person from constantly being bothered by it.
DESCRIPTION

An armor found on an abandoned battlefield by Katana . He was unaware the armor was a creation of a Sith Lord, namely Darth Voyance Darth Voyance . This was something Katana was not aware of when he found the armor on the battlefield, abandoned and unclaimed. As it laid there with no one to claim the armor at all, he decided to claim the armor for himself so he would have something that would both fit his needs, and provide himself aesthetically more appealing than the armor he was wearing. Little did he know the armor was made by Darth Voyance as a way to menace her enemies - by driving them insane. The armor was made so it could return unharmed to whoever was stupid enough, and would annoy them by continuing to do so despite their best efforts to get rid of said armor. It was also made so it could "whisper" in their ear with the Dark Side of the Force, slowly corrupting the wearer to be more and more like a Sith, until they fell completely to the Darkness.

Across the cosmos, a few other individuals were able to find versions of the armor.



 
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Krass Wyms

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Katana

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Darth Voyance

Please show permission from Voyance to use them as a manufacturer.

Returns to User Unharmed: The key attribute of the user is whatever they do to get rid of it, the armor will always return unharmed to their possession.

This will require substantially more details about how it does this. While it can be a joke there is no basis for it in legends or NuCanon

Mind Protection: Any and all attempts to use any forms of Telepathic Attacks will be met with a sort of "Backlash" as well as a surge of pain. This is in addition to being blocked.

Completely protection/immunity top anything is not allowed. Additionally the backlash will need more detail.

An armor found on an abandoned battlefield by Katana . He was unaware the armor was a creation of a Sith Lord, namely Darth Voyance .
This was something Katana was not aware of when he found the armor on the battlefield, abandoned and unclaimed.
As it laid there with no one to claim the armor at all, he decided to claim the armor for himself so he would have something that would both fit his needs, and provide himself aesthetically more appealing than the armor he was wearing.

Half of your description is literally repeating the same thing.

It was also made so it could "whisper" in their ear with the Dark Side of the Force,

This implies a sentience to the armor which will need more detail.

All and all this armor is in need of a lot of work. You packed it with weaknesses but have effects with little explanation. It seems to be built around a joke feature. Convince me this is serious and not just a joke submission.
 
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