Approved Tech Armor of The Bloodscrawls

[The Battalion]

• Intent: To sub a Unique Light Armor for Percival Io

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• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: Light Armor

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Nathan Bloodscrawl (Morris Crownwraithe, Deceased)
• Affiliation: Percival Io
• Market Status: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Armorweave, Electronics

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight: Light
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Very Low
  • Kinetic: High
  • Lightsabers: None
  • Vibro: High
  • Acid: High
  • Temperature Extremes: Very High
  • Ion: Very Low
  • Electricity: Very Low
  • Sonic: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Damage Resistant Stealth Suit, with Stealth field Generator that not only reduces a person's presence in the Force, but visually conceals them and a Sound Dampening Stealth Unit altered by Alkahest to provide as close to true total silence as possible. Overlay of Kerestian Light Absorbing Cells, also altered by Alkahest
• Full range of movement
• Alkahest Fingerprint Masque System in gloves
• SVC-700 Voice Scrambler
• Concealed Escape Kit
• Built in Tech Specialist Belt
• Built in False Eye Technology in Mask
• Night Vison, Thermal Vision, and Binocular visual systems

STRENGTHS

• More than a man: The suit is fully protective combat scout armor, allowing for survival in a wide range of scenarios, and contains potent tools to defeat multiple forms of military grade security, such as finger print mask tech built into the gloves and false eye tech in the mask that have been altered by Alkahest to have a better chance of fooling biometric security systems to help defeat finger print and eye locks. It also contains a voice scrambler that creates distortions that prevent eavesdropping from electronic means as well as a concealed escape kit
• The Hero We Deserve: It possesses a number of Alkahest stealth systems, such as a Stealth Field Generator that reduces one's Presence in the Force as well as visually conceal and a Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that was altered with Alkahest to be so quiet even those with extremely sensitive hearing would potentially have extreme difficulty hearing the User. and the Light absorbing Cell overlay means the user can creat a radius of near Pitch Black conditions up to 4 meters in size
• Watchful Protector: The suit has a number of enhanced visual systems, including Thermal, Night, and Binocular modes

WEAKNESSES

• Unbiased: Absolutely will not function in Force Voids
• Unprejudiced: though the altered stealth systems lower the odds of being detected by Force Users, even cleaning Droids have a much better chance of perceiving the field, limiting it's utility
• Fair: The only way to use the fingerprint masque and false eye tech is to physically touch and stare into the eyes of the person whose biometric data needs to be captured
• The Only Morality in a Cruel World: Its outdated electronics make it highly vulnerable to EMP and will require extensive repairs due to its particular materials. You're not fixing this with some random, off the shelf kit. Also, due to its age, its stealth functions may randomly shut on and off for about thirty seconds every once in a while. It's really matter of chance.
• Stealth Limits: It's stealth field systems can only be active 21 minutes before needing a period of 35 to cool down and recharge. Also, they cannot both be active at the same time, also, Force Users skilled in illusions can perceive the user, especially those who practice white current techniques, and Dark Masters can perceive their presence, especially if they are aware of a threat of intruder to begin with. Followers of the Disciples of Twilight who regularly use The Force to alter their vision would be able to perceive the user through the stealth field. Light Side Users can sense it from a distance
• Dark Side: Waves of Darkness or bolt of Hatred can cause significant damage to it's Alkahest parts
• Energy: Electrical surges can completely fry the electronics, requiring extensive repair. Ion damage can shut it's systems down for a half hour until it reboots and has no resistance to sabers and very little to blasters

DESCRIPTION

The armor of Nathan Arnold Bloodscrawl, birth name of Morris Crownwraith, the man who gave Elaine Tear to the Cult of The Brain Demon, resulting in the creation of The Battalion. The Lone Survivor of a massacre instigated by Elaine at the Estate of his Family over the issue of some sort of lost Light Side Superweapon whose location the Bloodscrawls preferred to die over to conceal, Nathan suffered from Post Traumatic Stress over the incident for years which he carefully concealed from other Jedi in order to hide the fact that a single Bloodscrawl had survived. This armor is a family heirloom, passed down from Father to Son. The Bloodscrawls were once considered the Warrior Poets of Ession, and of the Anarchy that was often present on Ession during the Gulag Plague, the lands controlled by the Bloodscrawl Family were among the few havens of order during those times. Morris never took this armor into battle, forced to conceal it in order to keep up the Lie that the Bloodscrawls had all died. His own wife never even knew about it. The Battalion discovered it after going over to the remains of the Bloodscrawl's Estate on Ession before the Plague crisis ended, apparently having been laid to rest there by Morris himself. The Battalion confiscated it, never realizing the connection to Morris until the modern era when she learned the truth. This armor was gifted to Percival as a peace gesture given recent events, as The Battalion sincerely did all she could to allow his beloved Rebecca to surface more from the depths of the Witch called The Deluge, only able to note in private the irony that Percy's "Grandfather" hated her as much as Percival himself hates The Amalgam for corrupting the Woman he loved.

The symbol at the center of the chest is the family crest of the Bloodscrawls, called the Fanged Chevron. Ancient Bloodscrawl Jedi would paint it over their eyes before going into battle. It's horned appearance is a distinct style native to Ancient Ession

 

[Krass Wyms]

The Battalion

Alright let us begin

Damage Resistant Stealth Suit, with Stealth field Generator, Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that have been altered with Alkahest to affect others with their abilities by physically touching them, Overlay of Kerestian Light Absorbing Cells, also altered by Alkahest

Alchemized Fingerprint Masque System in gloves

The Hero We Deserve: It possesses a number of alchemized stealth systems, such as a Stealth Field Generator and Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that can have the effects they impart on his suit be spread to up to several different people for a short period of a half hour, and the Light absorbing Cell overlay means the user can creat a radius of near Pitch Black conditions up to 21 meters in size

Firstly As previous judgements have gone and been explained. You can't have both alkahest and alchemy one is lightside and one is darkside they would cancel each other out and destroy the item.

Secondly: Do you have a canon basis for being able to spread a stealth field generator via touch and it remaining when you remove your hand?

Thirdly: Nope 21 meters is a no reduce that by several factors please.... and you are not going to be allowed to lay hands on several people to cloak them. Assuming you can provide canon basis for the above the highest amount allowed to share the cloak would be one other person within proximity. Even that was debated to direct contact.

Watchful Protector: The suit has been altered so anyone who wears it has a better chance of perceiving Force Adept's attempting to hide their bodies physically through the Force

You are going to have to expand upon this as there are several methods of concealing oneself in the force and each of them is very different application.

Dark Side: Waves of Darkness or bolt of Hatred can cause significant damage to it's Alchemized parts

Again if it is alchemized then darkside energies will not harm it.

Now those are the major problems from round one. We'll clear those up and begin round two... but I have to say while this is ambitious it is broad and lacks focus. You want to do more with minimal drawbacks which have been warned about in the past. So I would suggest focusing this.

 

[The Battalion]

Have made extensive edits, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Sorry for the delay was in the last days of packing and moving The Battalion

You barely addressed what I asked some changes but I will repeat the questions

Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that have been altered with Alkahest to affect others with their abilities by physically touching them

Do you have a canon basis for being able to spread a stealth field generator via touch and it remaining when you remove your hand?

the highest amount allowed to share the cloak would be one other person within proximity. Even that was debated to direct contact.

Yes I see you changed it however others implies more then one which is more then will be allowed and the physical touch would need to be maintained.

Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that have a very low chance of being perceived by even master Dark Force Users,

You are going to have to expand upon this as there are several methods of concealing oneself in the force and each of them is very different application.

There are four more common forms of stealth enhanced by the force. Each with distinctive forms of detection and skill to use.

Mental Manipulation is the easiest you are doing a large mind trick to alter perception around you so others will not notice you.
Disciples of twilight cloaking and concealment which involves light bending and shrinking their force presence.

White Current from the Fallanassi which involves illusions and being able to immerse themselves into the current which requires training to use and detect but others who know how to you it would be able to see you.

Sith Magic based cloaking and illusions of stealth are some of the hardest and require both ritual and sacrifice to use.

Dark force masters could detect all of these quite easily and it is very vague. You will have to choose one form with its weaknesses and strengths to proceed as well as make ALL required edits.

 

[The Battalion]

Have made significant edits to the sub, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Alright it is looking decent just now one or two things

a Sound Dampening Stealth Unit that's also capable of silencing any ranged weapon the user is holding

You are going to need to provide a canon example of the sound dampening Remaining in stealth when you are firing it. Yes it can dampen the sounds made but as with pretty much all stealth units once you initiate combat or move fast the camo effect is broken.

Also, if firing ranged weapons with the Sound Dampening field, the user is unable to cloak due to the power drain: They cannot both be active at the same time

You even make it a point of the weaknesses it can't fire and have the stealth systems at the same time.

Force Users skilled in illusions can perceive the user, especially those who practice white current techniques, and Dark Masters can perceive their presence, especially if they are aware of a threat of intruder to begin with.

Based upon this it sounds like it is working to mirror the Disciples of Twilights stealth and concealment which they had developed a means for perceiving it.

They used the Force to gain low-light vision and to locate enemies that concealed themselves.

Please add such to the weakness as those few in the galaxy who have been trained would be able to see through the concealment.

Additionally alkahest like alchemy is deeply rooted in the lightside and would allow those sensing with the force to be able to see it. artifacts are usually a beacon that can be found.

Good for a second round.

 

[The Battalion]

Have made more edits, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

thank you The Battalion

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