Approved Starship Arrowhead-MK1 Superiority Fighter

[Ravenous]

Out of Character Information

• Intent: To create a Starfighter useful to Intrepid Inc.
• Image Source: The Link
• Cannon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

Production Information

• Manufacturer: Intrepid Inc.
• Affiliation: Intrepid Inc., Closed Market
• Model: Arrowhead-MK1 Superiority Fighter
• Production: Limited
• Materials: Durasteel Plating, Doonium, Transparisteel

Technical Specifications

• Classification: Starfighter
• Length: 11.7 Meters
• Width: 4.0 Meters
• Height: 3.1 Meters
• Armament: High 2 Heavy Ion Cannons, 2 Laser Cannons, 4 Proton Torpedoes
• Defenses: Very Low
• Squadron Count: Average, 9 ships
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: Average
• Hyperdrive class: 1 Very Fast

Strengths

• A diverse set of weaponry
• Able to be produced in quick succession
• High Maneuverability

Weaknesses

• Heavy weaponry slows down the ship
• Low defenses

Description

The Arrowhead MK1-Superiority Fighter is a starship with a large wingspan and twin Ion engines strapped to its rear, When flying the ship will give off an odd whistling sound which helped to give it the name "Arrowhead." The cockpit of the craft is surprisingly roomy and even incorporated a feeding system into the piolets mask. The Arrowhead so far is exclusively produced by Intrepid Inc. on the planet of Kriselist with the intent of being sold on the market for a modest profit. The craft is mainly used to escort and protect Intrepid's compounds and shipments as well as pursuing those caught on the Company's bad side.

Aldric

 

[Aldric]

Heya!

It seems that you're missing the actual rating on your Armament, Squadron Count, and Hyperdrive Class. It's important to explicitly include a rating ranging from None to Extreme for Armament and Squadron Count, and a rating from Very Slow to Very Fast for your Hyperdrive Class. Without the ratings you're missing important elements of the template.

Under your Image Source, you have the image and the actual source link in a spoiler. While putting the image itself into a spoiler is permitted, the link should be left outside the spoiler, as all the submission text should be plainly viewable. The actual "Image Source" text from the "Image Source:" field seems to have gone missing also, it's a minor thing but for template completion could you add it back in?

Additionally, the Permissions field is for linking the permissions of other writers to use any external submissions not directly tied to your company or character. Since Intrepid Inc. is the manufacturer and a group you are the owner of, there is no need to include them in that field.

Similarly, the Primary Source field is mainly for linking to other submissions or articles you are using as bases for your submission, image credits should be put into the Image Source portion of the template.

Otherwise, it's a very solid starfighter sub. Really liking the worldbuilding details in the description!

Ravenous

 

[Aldric]

Heya again!

Feel free to add a new reply and tag the Factory Judge who picked up your submission after you made the edits in the future, the tagging system won't alert me or someone else if the tag was edited into the original submission!

When the starship template says this in the Squadron Count section,

Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.

the rating referred to is one of the steps from None to Extreme, as an exact number alone can leave it ambiguous as to which rating you meant. Can you put the specific rating (either Average or Low based on the current count of 9) into the Squadron Count section?

Ravenous

 

[Ravenous]

Aldric All patched up!

 

[Aldric]

Awesome. A very solid starfighter with nice worldbuilding touches. Looking good!

Passing it up to the maestro of mechanics.

Vora Kaar Ravenous

 

[Vora Kaar]

Approved

Ravenous