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Approved Location Atrisian Breakwater

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Space Station Name: Atrisian Breakwater
  • Classification: Structure
  • Location: Core Worlds
  • Station Model: Breakwater
  • Size: Massive
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth
  • Population: Crowded
  • Demographics: Atrisian
  • Traffic: High: Designed as the jumping off point between the greater galaxy and the commonwealth. The stations and design allows them to modulate and regulaate entry and exit from Commonwealth space.
  • Accessibility: Two fold accessible. The exterior has a series of designated stations that allow access to trade and transport. With sections where ships once approved can pass through. While the interior houses specific routes between the bueys and stations that allow travel for those approved. Sneaking in and getting past it is meant to be harder as the bueys are upgraded stormseeds and work effectively to create a stormwall to protect Atrisian space. Through a combination of linked stations that project dyson class planetary shielding between them... this allowing it to be a large structure but not completely a massive physical one... at seventy percent of it being energy shielding.
  • Description: Created on the borders of the Commonwealth itself. With all of the worlds that serve and work with Atrisia benefitting from their advances the needs to protect them and continue advancing came. The breakwater would be a massive series of stations designed to encompass the Commonwealth itself. Linked through sectional layered shielding.. staffed with soldiers, personnel, biots and droids that would be needed... families and hosting many trade hubs for outsiders.
POINTS OF INTEREST
Silk Roads: Internally within the breakwater, the silk roads serve as secret hyperspace lanes that are used by Atrisian ships.

Crown and Spears Hall: Serving as the external trading hub for outsiders. Crown and Spears facilitates trade between the galaxy and the Commonwealth.

Atrisi System: Within the breakwater and highly protected. THe multi layered defensive stations, hyperspace security networks and stormseeds are designed to secure and protect the capital of the Commonwealth itself.

SECURITY
Maximum

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Newly constructed largely in secret... to a point it is not exactly something you would or should be abel to hide. The breakwater is a mixture of engineering feats in the galaxy. From the stormwall of the Nihil to the strange transitory mists and even the barrier around the galaxy and unknown region that serves to protect the galaxy. The atrisian engineers developing it under the direction of Miyoung used it as one of their first attempts at Stellar engineering.. to better improve many more of what they could use. With their continued pushing towards a post scarcity level of society within the Commonwealth through their advanced technologies. The breakwater serves in a few ways to allow them to isolate and improve in peace for themselves. With reverse engineered stormseeds being used to create a wall around the commonwealth space with specific routes opened and their silk roads as well as silk gates for moving around. The history of it being something that they would hope to be able to make in time as Atrisia continues to push the Commonwealth forward through its golden age of advancement.
 
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:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
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Junko Ike Junko Ike

Hi I wanted to let you know that I will be assisting one of our Codex Judges with this submission. It is fantastic and creative. There are a few moving parts to this we may want to ask questions on, so please be patient. The goal here would be to help get this approved!
 
:: HERO of KORRIBAN ::
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Junko Ike Junko Ike

Okay thanks for your patience. After going through this you have provided us with a lot of factory submissions which is awesome. I also understand what you are trying to do doesn’t seem to have a template that best fits it.

Here is what I think we need to do to best help…

I want to treat this as a spacey station.

Most of what you have here does not need to change, but I would love to have this structure include a companion factory subbed model due to the defense systems etc.

If you want to talk about adding certain fields from the space station template, and keeping this one, we can!

Let me know how you’d like to proceed template wise, and in the meantime let s get something going in the factory to pair with this.
 
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