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Axton Milfred REVISED/Rewritten

Axton Milfred

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AXTON REVISED

NAME: Axton Milfred

FACTION: Independant
RANK: General
SPECIES: Human, adopted by Tuskan Tribe
AGE: Twenty Eight
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: Six Feet Three Inches
WEIGHT: One Hundred Sixty Pounds
EYES: Left Eye: Blue (synthetic) Right Eye: Red
HAIR: Dirty Blonde (graying), Shoulder length.
SKIN: White. Light tan.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :
Axton is highly trained with all types of weapons. Weather it be long range snipers or close range pistols, he is trained in it. He is also trained with explosives, speech craft, is fluent in several languages, and can custom build weapons from scratch.
Axton is very cocky. He gets ahead of himself sometimes and it can result in the mission failing. He doesn't like to rely on others for support. He would much rather rely on himself and his weapons then other people. He doesn't stop to think about the situation. He usually just charges in and deals with the problem head on. He is also very sensitive about his synthetic left eye. The wiring makes him have random attacks every now and then. Although he has learned to control it, it is a very sensitive spot to be punched and or talked about it.

SHIP:
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BIOGRAPHY:
Axton Milfred was born and adopted into a small Tuskan tribe on Tatooine. Not much is known about his human birth parents and younger life. In his teens he left Tatooine and joined the Imperial Academy to begin training as a trooper. During his time at the academy, Axton was known as a trouble maker. He never followed orders, instead going with his own instincts. Though they almost always helped, it always resulted in him being either de-ranked or punished by his superiors.

After six years, at the age of eighteen, Axton was a commander and had his own squad. His squad, code-named Whiskey, was a group of misfits who got the lowest of assignments. During a mission to obtain enemy intel on Naboo, his squad fell under attack and got pinned. Since they already had the intel, Axton was ordered to leave his squad to die and get the intel to the nearest Sith, who was in orbit on his ship. Axton disobeyed his orders and stayed, ensuring his squad survived. Though it didn't matter. Upon arriving at the Sith Master's ship, his squad was killed and he was stripped of his command. Axton then left the Empire and moved on to join the Grand Army of the Republic.

Though his time with the Republic was shorter then with the Empire, it was even grander. During his time he gained the rank of General and commanded his own fleet. Being one of the youngest generals was both privileged and horror since older captains and commanders wouldn't believe in him. This ultimately resulted in his left eye being blown out. While attacking a Sith fleet, one soldier disobeyed his command to flank and it resulted in a explosion on the bridge of his ship. Though no one died, there was alot of injuries. Axton himself lost his left eyes. Axton was able to get a synthetic left eye to replace it. This has affected him more mentally then physically do to the wiring. Axton spent three years with the Republic before leaving when he was twenty one.

After leaving the Republic he began operating at as a mercenary and bounty hunter. He has been one since, working for anyone that was willing to pay.
 
I'm no judge but I would feel uncomfortable with others knowing what the face of a Tusken looks like, as it hasn't been revealed canonically.

This would obviously be optional given a it is your character, but how did a technophobic Savage become what he is now?

Your character I guess.
 

Thadd Zarr

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Hummm... I have a question. You said that he was a "general" and commanded a fleet? Is that canonically correct? He seems a little young to occupy such a high rank......
 

Axton Milfred

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Actually Krayt was a Tuskan. So we have seen the face of a Tuscan. It is actually the reason why he was banned from his clan, because Obi Wan removed the wrappings and revealed his face.

He adapted. I am thinking of adding that in but I actually don't know completely why he left. The cannon I wrote for him was that he thought they should all, as in all the Tuskan clans, join together and start their own faction and expand through the galaxy. They disagreed and he left.
 

Axton Milfred

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As I stated, he was a young general. It resulted in many not believing in him and disobeying him. He obtained the rank through his combined experience of being a commander for the Empire and being a natural born leader and fighter through his Tuskan blood.
 
Axton Milfred said:
Actually Krayt was a Tuscan. So we have seen the face of a Tuscan. It is actually the reason why he was banned from his clan, because Obi Wan removed the wrappings and revealed his face.
That would be because he was an adopted human. So no, we don't know what a Tusken's face look like.
 

Axton Milfred

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Yea you are right. Just confirmed that. Then I will be the first. Or, which I am sure everyone will want me to do, I'll change it so I was human adopted.

@[member="Thadd Zarr"]

They command the ground forces but still have some command over the men aboard ships. He was the commander of the few platoons in the fleet.
 

Axton Milfred

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That is what I thought. Man I am so stupid. Whatever. As Ashin says, the first post is always a rough draft.
 

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