Approved Starship B27 "Spire" Blade Frigate

[Nyrasa Emrick]

• Intent: To create a vessel for the Blackwatch
• Image Source: https://ktarnfleet.fandom.com/wiki/Jem'Hadar_Vanguard_gunboat - edited by BB#5602
• Headers: Kainan Wolfe
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: HPI Consortium, HPI Consortium 2, First United Astral Engineering, First United Astral Engineering (2), GDI Holonet Catalogue
• Primary Source: N/A

• Manufacturer: Nyrasa Emrick, Blackwatch engineers, Apex Corporation
• Affiliation: Nyrasa Emrick, Blackwatch, Eternal Empire
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: B27
• Production: Semi-Unique
• Material: Quadanium Steel, Durasteel, Technical Components

• Classification: Personal Transport, Frigate
• Length: 250 meters
• Width: 140 meters
• Height: 70 meters
• Armament: High
• Defenses: Low
• Hangar Space: High
• Hangar Allocations:
  • Starfighters: 1
  • Support Craft: 1
• Single Craft Hangar: Yes
• Maneuverability Rating: Average
• Speed Rating: Average
• Hyperdrive: Hermóðr-class 0.1 Hyperdrive

• GDE-01 Antimatter Reactor System
• KC-A301 ‘Shrike’ Point Defense Laser Turret
• RC-RV308 ‘Ravager’ Assault Missile Pod
• KC-73X ‘Ripple’ Pulse Cannon (top center)
• Phase III "Force Avenger" Energy Shield (backup)
• Skuggalegt P-pattern Stealth Polymer
• BACS-X89p | Breytast Adaptive Camouflage System

• Hermóðr-class 0.1 Hyperdrive
• GDE-RS5 Molecular Reactive Shield Array
• FAE/S-05 ECM Array
• Ósýnilegt-class Cloaking Device

• Major Stealth capabilities
• O.1 Hyperdrive

• Low defences
• Small hanger space

This is a fast and manoeuvrable ship, with extreme stealth capabilities. The defences are low, but it makes up for it with armaments. The blade shaped wing like part of the ship is plated with extra steel and contains a razor sharp edge able to dig into starships hulls before they can react. It also has a large cannon with a high level of damage and rate of fire.

 

[AMCO]

Nyrasa Emrick

This submission will require relatively numerous changes. Please make sure to address all fives points noted below.

1. You are missing a Hangar Space rating - three squadrons for a vessel between 200 and 349 metres would be Very High.
2. Permission is required for these three submissions (One, Two, Three) - please include them in the Permissions field as usual.
3. You do have permission for the three HPI submissions, but they are Semi-Unique. Per General Factory Rule 8. submissions can only include submissions of the same or higher production ratings. Please remove these submissions or change the Production to Semi-Unique.
   1. Such stealth devices would not be permitted on a Limited vessel anyway, per the Restricted Materials rules.
4. Your Strengths and Weaknesses are downright barren - please mention, at the very least, the remarkably fast hyperdrive.
5. I am unsure what "It also comes in a corvette variant." in the Description is meant to mean. If this is meant to reference a separately subbed variant, please link it. If this submission is meant to come in different sizes, it would need to be noted in all relevant areas, most notably the measurements and Hangar Space; such variance is technically permitted, but it can be difficult to do it in a comprehensible manner.

 

[AMCO]

Nyrasa Emrick

Status on this? If you have not replied by next Sunday (06.03.2022) I will be archiving this submission for inactivity.

 

[AMCO]

Submission Name: B27 "Spire" Blade Frigate
Link to Submission: (x)
Reason for Factory Modification Request:

• Was archived for inactivity

 

[Nyrasa Emrick]

Well since it's been a while, could you give me a run down on what I need to do? I believe I changed some things.

AMCO

 

[AMCO]

Nyrasa Emrick

Alright, I'll address it by the points listed above.

1. You have added a Hangar Space rating, but the correct rating for two squadrons at 200-349 metres is High, not Very Low. Please change it.
2. Your permissions appear to be in order.
3. This has been addressed by lowering the Production Rating.
4. Good enough, I have no objections to conciseness.
5. You do not seem to have removed or explained the 'It also comes in a corvette variant.' part of the Description.

As you can see, only point 1. and 5. remain. 1. should be simple enough, whereas 5. would require you to do one of the following.

• A: Remove the sentence. This is probably the easiest option.
• B: Change your submission in its entirety so that it works as both a corvette and a frigate. I cannot recommend this unless you really know what you are doing - while technically not against any rule, doing this in a tidy fashion would be rather difficult.
• C: Explain what you mean by it in another way, e.g., "I am referencing another submission."

 

[Nyrasa Emrick]

Done.

AMCO

 

[AMCO]

Nyrasa Emrick

Approved.