Birthday punch time!

[Valgærd]

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Exactly one year ago today I joined Chaos! Woo! So in honour of this, time for a critique thread! What do you guys like? Hate? What can I improve? What am I doing well?​

 

[Darth Carnifex]

*Looks at your characters*

Soon™

[member="Bambi"]

 

[Ravenfire]

[member="Bambi"]

I have written almost everything with ya and am helping with a faction. If I need to critique you I would have suggested it a lot time ago