Factory Denied Blasphemer's Amulet

[PERSENUS]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: For the few things that Perenus will ever trust on his journey
• Image Source: https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Amulet_of_Talos_(Skyrim)
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Perenus
• Affiliation: Perenus
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Wood, Kasha Crystal

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Focuses Perenus, granting him calmness during meditation. This allows him to let himself flow into the Force more deeply and even concentrate his emotions, using the Jedi's use of the Crystal to dismiss them in reverse. It is a rather ingenious use of the crystal.
• The amulet, to whoever is worn, is given a constant shroud of Battlemind.
• If the person is Force-Sensitive and on the Lightside, their Power in the Force will increase. However, if a Dark-Sider, like Perenus, knows how to turn such focus in on itself, their abilities will also increase, much like the how Sith Swords do.
• During use, this may become a beacon of the Force, as most Force Objects are, which can attract others.

STRENGTHS

• Enhances the wearer.
• Grants them a pathway to develop their prowess further in meditation.

WEAKNESSES

• There is little to protect the amulet except the wearer themselves. It can easily be broken off or burnt.
• Force Nullification Fields will render this inert.

DESCRIPTION
Perenus carved the amulet himself. The crystal, he found, in the jungles of a planet he did not know the name of, calmed him of his troubles. As a Sith, this was worrisome but Perenus greatly needed it. He sat by it, slept by it, and made it a new home by his side. It resonates with the Force, though with the Light Side. He will corrupt it truly in time but for now, he carries it with him to help him sleep at night.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

PERSENUS

To start your image and image source do not match.

Battlemind is brought about by intense focus which this helps with but it isn't wear it and you automatically have it. You would need to have training in it and this can reduce the time needed to use it. Pleas make mention of it.

All force objects are generally a beacon when used as the power is being used with it. Please mention this

Force nullification fields and anti force means are encountered. How will this result when near them?

 

[PERSENUS]

Then how come you approved that use of Battlemind here? It says that the cause of the sword gaining the ability to constantly use Battlemind is because of the bond between it and its user, then why not the same here?

Also, it does lead to the image source. Its a video game object, I got to the wiki for it because its official artwork.

I added that it becomes inert when in force Nullification field.

 

[Krass Wyms]

PERSENUS

The factory will not base judgments on precedents or the approval of prior submissions.

but if you continued to read

whenever drawn emits an ever-present aura of the Battlemind power for the wielder, be it Mato or someone else, constantly urging them towards its use

His blade requires a specif condition to have battlemind active. He is already in combat and this is making it easier.

As to your image if I click on it I am taken to imgur. That is not an image source. If you made the image simply say so in the source but the amulet of talos is not on display. If the image is not pictured it does not need to be listed in the sources.

Apologies but it was brought to our attention the background image of your template violates rules

#3 and #10 of the board

3. This board is rated PG-13 by MPAA standards.

10. Pornography, nudity, or any overt display of sexual nature is prohibited.

The template of the image will have to be changed please. This is not a request

 

[PERSENUS]

So its a matter of wording and technicality. Fine.

There are two images on the template and only one leads to to Imgur (Skull Emblem) and that is my character's emblem that I edited and photoshopped myself. It has nothing to do with the invention, just an aesthetic choice. The Amulet of Talos is beside the text, floating on the right. Are you on Mobile? Perhaps You can't see it there.

 

[Krass Wyms]

PERSENUS

thank you for the background and yes the wording is important.

Battlemind is brought about by intense focus which this helps with but it isn't wear it and you automatically have it. You would need to have training in it and this can reduce the time needed to use it. Pleas make mention of it.

All force objects are generally a beacon when used as the power is being used with it. Please mention this

These two edits are needed still.

 

[Krass Wyms]

PERSENUS

What is the status of this submission

 

[Krass Wyms]

PERSENUS

Moved to archives for inactivity if you wish to get it out ask an admin or RPJ to move it