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Approved Tech Blue Coral Divers Cloak

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Blue Coral Divers
  • Affiliation: Blue Coral Divers Clan
  • Market Status: Closed Market
  • Model: Blue Coral Diver's Witches poncho
  • Modularity: Enchantments into the fabric
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Local fibers found on Dathomir, and/or Kattada
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Fabric that responds to moisture, expanding when damp to prevent water/wind from passing through the fibers, constricts when dry, serving for sun protection
  • When the Blue Coral Divers create each cloak, or a group of them, several of the Witches will sing a spell of protection, to provide the garment with very limited Force Barrier esque abilities, to stop glancing blows, from kinetic, and energy weapons, or a harmful Force power.
STRENGTHS
  • Provides fairly decent protection from the cold, and rain, or wind
  • Is good at warming up a being after being in the water
WEAKNESSES
  • Does not provide advanced protection on par with even light armor, designed to protect against the elements and glancing weapons and Force power hits
DESCRIPTION
Originally the beginnings of a rough 'uniform' for the Blue Coral Divers clan, the Sea Witch Poncho is designed to be warm and soft, providing protection against the cold, rain, and wind. The fabrics used have a capability of expanding when damp, preventing more water from seeping through, while keeping the wearer's body heat close to the body. As the fabric dries, it thins out, providing sun protection while remaining cool for the wearer. The Blue Coral Divers Clan wear these as a pretty standard piece of utility garb, but also as a way to identify who they are to others.
 
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scarves-thick-and-warm-geometric-poncho-scarves-11_900x.jpg
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Blue Coral Divers
  • Affiliation: Blue Coral Divers Clan
  • Market Status: Closed Market
  • Model: Blue Coral Diver's Witches poncho
  • Modularity: Enchantments into the fabric
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Local fibers found on Dathomir, and/or Kattada
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Fabric that responds to moisture, expanding when damp to prevent water/wind from passing through the fibers, constricts when dry, serving for sun protection
  • The spell is normally one of protection, from the elements, specifically the cold and wet, but can be woven with another spell, within reason
STRENGTHS
  • Provides fairly decent protection from the cold, and rain, or wind
  • Is good at warming up a being after being in the water
WEAKNESSES
  • Does not provide protection aside from the spell and the warmth
DESCRIPTION
Originally the beginnings of a rough 'uniform' for the Blue Coral Divers clan, the Sea Witch Poncho is designed to be warm and soft, providing protection against the cold, rain, and wind. The fabrics used have a capability of expanding when damp, preventing more water from seeping through, while keeping the wearer's body heat close to the body. As the fabric dries, it thins out, providing sun protection while remaining cool for the wearer. The Blue Coral Divers Clan wear these as a pretty standard piece of utility garb, but also as a way to identify who they are to others.

Hello!

Very interesting sub. However, there are a few items that will require attention prior to approval.

1. Production Information:
  • Manufacturer: Please link 'Blue Coral Divers'
  • Affiliation: Please link 'Blue Coral DIvers'

2. Special Features:
  • “The spell is normally one of protection, from the elements, specifically the cold and wet, but can be woven with another spell, within reason”

    The spell you are referencing, as it currently stands within this submission, is fairly vague and there is a risk of someone coming back behind you to take advantage of said vagueness. This ‘spell’ will need to be properly defined as to what it can and cannot do in its entirety, so as to remove that ambiguity. I’d also recommend saying something like: “The spell can be woven with another spell, but that will require a new submission". Depending on how detailed you get, we may need to involve a codex judge to sign off.
 
Added links
Explained the spell further in Special Features and Weaknesses

Martin Draigo Martin Draigo

Thank you for editing in the links.

Also, thank you for elaborating on the spell.

Can you please provide links for the force powers you're using for inspiration of this 'spell'?

For example, are you using Cryokinesis?

Please list the force powers you're drawing inspiration from within the sub to add further clarity.
 
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