Factory Denied Bruce's Hammer

[William Nelson]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create one of the weapons that William uses as his signature ones.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: William Nelson
• Affiliation: Bruce Nelson (Edit > Changed Affiliation.)
• Model: BN-01 (Edit> Changed Model.)
• Modularity: The Force Crystal in the Hammer could be swapped out for different properties.
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  Force Crystal
• Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Hammer
• Size: Small
• Weight: Heavy

SPECIAL FEATURES

• High Tech Hammer

STRENGTHS

• Can control the weather.
• Can teleport to the hand.
• Can fly to his hand.
• Only William can wield this hammer.

WEAKNESSES

• Force Disruptions: Force Disruptions such as Ylasmari and the like would render the hammer completely useless with it's Force Abilities.
• Corrosive Acids: Acids are effective on the hammer.
• Ferrokinesis: Ferrokinesis is also effective against it.
• Requires intense physical strength, Cybernetics, or Force Body in order to lift.
• Force Corruption would render the hammer useless.

DESCRIPTION

A force imbued hammer created by William as one of the weapons that he carries. This hammer can fly to the hand of the user when they wish to. It integrates the technology of a Power Hammer as well into it allowing it to smash faces. In addition to that, rockets on the back of the hammer allow it to propel into the face of an opponent, and crush it. It can be manipulated by William as if it were an extension of his body. It also allows the user to manipulate the weather, call lightning, create minor Earthquakes, and the like. This particular hammer is one of the signature weapons that William uses.

(Edit > Added Detail) After a while William realized the hammer wasn't his style. So he passed it to Bruce to use as Bruce needed a weapon he could utilize and had been looking for one.

 

[John Locke]

Submission Name: William's Hammer
Link to Submission: William's Hammer
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: Upon thinking about it, the Hammer would better fit another character that isn't William.

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes made when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission to live judgement.

 

[William Nelson]

John Locke Edits completed, I listed them.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Bruce Nelson

Hello, I will be reviewing this and lets begin with the most glaring.

This is almost a cop of Mjolnir from Thor. Now while I am not one to knock being inspired by something this is far far to close and should be auto-denied for plagiarism but this is a chance to alter it.

Modularity: The Force Crystal in the Hammer could be swapped out for different properties.

This is very vague and could allow for anything you want. Please describe some examples or narrow it down to certain crystals.

High Tech Hammer

It integrates the technology of a Power Hammer as well into it allowing it to smash faces. In addition to that, rockets on the back of the hammer allow it to propel into the face of an opponent, and crush it

Please link the power hammer and rockets. The add in how they alter the weight and balance of the hammer since those are not exactly standard with something that is supposed to be small so they would and should be in the way.

• Can control the weather.
• Can teleport to the hand.
• Can fly to his hand.
• Only William can wield this hammer.

Controlling the weather can put this on par with a superweapon which is an auto deny please change it or have a very good reason why it should be allowed.
Teleportating is a powerful effect, what is used in it to let it teleport to him without the force being channeled into it?
If it can fly to his hand then why would it need to teleport?
How can only William wield the hammer? You have in weaknesses

Requires intense physical strength, Cybernetics, or Force Body in order to lift.

This would mean a person with some effort can easily lift it. What makes it only exclusive to him and how does Bruce wield it then if only William can?

Ferrokinesis: Ferrokinesis is also effective against it.

This is not something in star wars and it more in line with Magneto and Polaris from marvel.

Force Corruption would render the hammer useless.

What do you mean by force corruption?

 

[William Nelson]

Krass Wyms Please just Archive this.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Bruce Nelson

As you wish