Approved Tech Bryn'adûl | Superior Reinforcement Mutagen 1A

[Tathra Khaeus]

Bryn'adûl | Reinforcement Mutagen 1A

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Spoiler

• Intent: To detail the Mutagens used by Tathra.
• Image Source: X
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Name: Superior Reinforcement Mutagen
• Manufacturer: The Bryn'adûl
• Affiliation: Tathra Khaeus
• Homeworld: Draemidus Prime
• Production: Unique
• Modularity: N/A
• Material: Biomass, Kraelmundr Metal, Verikast Metal

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Mutation Organ
• Weight: Extreme
• Colour: N/A
• Resistances
• Blasters: High
• Kinetic: Very High
• Lightsabers: Very High
• Force: Extreme
• Elemental: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

• This mutagen effects the molecular composition of Tathra's bones and skin, absorbing Kraelmundr and ceramics in a chemical form, making Tathra's bones force resistant and nigh unbreakable as well. Where as his skin absorbs Verikast chemicals, giving additional defence against tearing and penetration, layering with ceramic carapace to increase the durability of the skin.

Strengths:

• Nigh Unbreakable Bones
• Incredible Force Protection
• Tougher Carapace

Weaknesses:

• Heavier Skeleton/Skin
• You will definitely sink

DESCRIPTION:
The Superior Reinforcement Mutagen 1A is an enhanced variation of ceramic-chemical mutagens. These are powerful mutagens, crafted from incredibly powerful alchemy and cosmic energy.

 

[Runi Verin]

Archived for inactivity in the Pre-Factory. Please place a request in here should you wish this item to be retrieved once more.

 

[Runi Verin]

Moved to Pre-Factory now. Please remember to make a note at the bottom of your submission summarizing the changes you have made and tag a member of the Factory Staff once you're ready for active judgement.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Runi Verin - Ready for live judgement.

Changes made:
Updated format
Updated Resistances

 

[Runi Verin]

Denied.​

Tathra Khaeus

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[John Locke]

Tathra Khaeus

Moved to pre-factory. Please tag me once you've made adjustments to the submission

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

John Locke updates made.

 

[John Locke]

Under Review

 

[John Locke]

Tathra Khaeus

So, in your strengths you mention elemental resistance, however, in the resistances, your elemental resistance is set to None. I assume this is an oversight while you were adjusting the submission, however, if there is something I'm not seeing could you please explain?

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

John Locke good catch, removed elemental defence from the strengths list.

 

[John Locke]

Tathra Khaeus

Thanks for that.

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