Approved Tech Capacitor Garb

[Moya Virtu]

• Intent: To sub a standard Light Armor

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• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: Light Armor

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Laertia Io
• Affiliation: Moya Virtu
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Armorweave

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight:
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Very Low
  • Kinetic: Very Low
  • Lightsabers: Extreme
  • Acid: Very High
  • Magic: Very High
  • Lightning: Extreme
  • Ion: Average
  • Cryo: Low
  • Flame: Low
  • Paddle beams: None
  • SPECIAL FEATURES

Capable of self repair due to onboard nanomachines

Extremely high resistance to Lightsaber Energy, Lightning Energy and Very High Resistance to Acid

Enhances strength by four no matter the guise

Blessed by the Light to have high resistances to magic

Enhances reflexes and speed to be 007 times faster than normal

High Powered Heat Sinks ensure Moya will never overheat

STRENGTHS

High Energy Protection: Modified by Laertia to have immense resistance to Energy such as Lightsabers, Lightning, and Ion

Corrosion resistance: Special chemical treatments make it resistant to all but the most powerful acids

Repair: Specially installed nanomachines are capable of slowly repairing the suit to full working order in a span of ten minutes

Blessed: A minor Lightside blessing gives her quadruple strength no matter her guise, enhances her reflexes and speed by 007 times that of a professional athlete

Mobility: The suit is very lightweight, allowing for full mobility.

Eye Catching: If this can't make her more persuasive, nothing will

Cold Storage: High powered heat sinks scavenged from recent battles have been installed throughout her suit ensuring constant, safe diffusion of thermal energy buildup in Moya's body

WEAKNESSES

Blasters: Can only sustain two pistol strength shots or one rifle shot before failing

Bullets: Bullets rip through it easily

Flame: Flame not only does damage, it prevents her suit from repairing for five minutes

Cryo: Cryo freezes the suitsand drastically slows her movements

Paddle Beams: Paddle beams shut down all electronic system for one minute

Force Voids: Will not function in Force Voids

Ion: It takes four shots to shut the suit down for thirty seconds

DESCRIPTION

The Capacitor Garb is Laertia's latest attempt to protect her caretaker in battle. Spending nearly four weeks modifying the suit to her liking. She then blessed it in a Light Nexus on Kashyyyk, ensuring high resistance to magic. Incapable of overheating in the suit, Moya is now much much deadlier.

Disturbingly, Laertia seems to have been inspired by a very faint memory of seeing Darth Themis in this armor at some point subconsciously--it heavily resembles Themis's Sith Armor, albeit with a lighter shade of purple.

 

[Moya Virtu]

Ready for judging, John Locke

 

[Aldric]

Heya!

A few of your template fields are empty, you'll have to fill those out before we can move on.
Specifically:

• Modularity
• Production
• Weight

Then there's a wording inconsistency between your Special Features, your Strengths, and your Resistances section:

Resistances:

• Energy: Very Low
• [...]
• Acid: Very High

SPECIAL FEATURES
Extremely high resistance to energy and acid

STRENGTHS:
High Energy Protection: Modified by Laertia to have immense resistance to Energy such as Lightsabers, Lightning, and Ion

The important parts are highlighted in yellow.
Your Energy resistance is only rated at Very Low but is then later stated to be either extremely high, under Special Features, or high, under Strengths, The Acid resistance is also said to be Extremely High in the quoted Special Features section, which is a bit too close to home to the Extreme rating. If you could alter the mentions of both Energy and Acid in the sections listed above to reflect the ratings chosen, that'd be terrific.

Oh, and lastly, you'll need to link or tag the person who created this (Laertia Io) in your Manufacturer section.

Moya Virtu

 

[Moya Virtu]

Aldric

Have altered certain wording based on feed back, but the reason it seemes inconsistent is becauset he suit specifically protects against certain forms of energy but not others. Its geared to stopping lightsabers, but is vulnerable to regular blasters and such.

 

[John Locke]

Moya Virtu

Thank you for making that change and those clarifications.

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