Character Feedback: Darth Excidium

[Matt the Radar Tech]

Greetings, sentients.

I've been reading some feedback threads (and offering opinions in some), so I wanted to do the same and ask for some character feedback concerning Darth Excidium.

Broad feedback, specific feedback, anything you feel will give me an idea of where he's at, where he's headed, how interactions feel, and the like. Even readers who I haven't RP'd with, is he interesting, do you like reading posts with him, does he offer any unique qualities that should be expanded on, or lessened? Etc.

Any feedback is appreciated.

Thanks.

 

[Farah]

I’ve only written with you once but overall, I enjoy the way you as a writer handle Excidium the character.

He’s got some nice rich dark-mage vibes with dash of mad scientist thrown in, but not to the point where it overpowers the character and makes him monotone in that regard. You as a writer paint the character well. I wish I had more to say (hopefully I will soon!) but right now I’m looking forward to seeing where he goes and what he does, especially with the Dark Magus