Character feedback for Darlyn Excron

[Darlyn Excron]

So in full honesty I'm quite terrified that I might've made a poor character, and dates and years are swimming in my head making it hard to be confident I made someone well done and fun/interresting. So uhm, would anyone like to give me a bit of feedback?


Seriously feel free to help me out. I tried to be somewhat vague enough that he could be sort of fitted into whatever he ends up doing. ^^" Any help would be appriciated.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/87357-darlyn-excron-the-yellow-bladed-hunter/

 

[Sheila]

you.. you haven't done anything with him yet... Like bio's can be pretty and all but they only give the barest feel of the character. If you made him and think you messed up... How are we supposed to assure you you didn't? You might not like some things when you actually rp them. it might not feel comfortable but we really don't know your preferences in style of rping. Wait until you've done a couple of threads and gotten a feel for the character or done something people might take some notice for.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

We can't give you feedback on a character until they've done something. Bios tell only the basic story, their life up until you start RPing for the most part.

As [member="Sheila"] said, it's a nice bio for sure but....

 

[Darlyn Excron]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Well, I'm usually used to having bio's sort of judged on if they justify having X and X powers, or such. If that makes sense? It's probably just me adjusting from being judged somewhat harshly on pre-justifying having one power or another. ^^"

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darlyn Excron"]
We judge people on how they use their powers and skills in RP, not so much in the bio. That is, unless your padawan claims to know Force Storm and Force Light.

 

[Darlyn Excron]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Oh heck no. Storm is pretty rare in and of itself if I recall, heck I only even remember Sidious and Vitate possessing the full powered version (though i could be soo wrong). ^^" Not that new to it.

Still, if the bio's good that means I didn't miss any crucial lore anywhere, which means at least that shouldn't need repairs.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Darlyn Excron"]
Your bio is fine.