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8/2020 update: this bio is an embarrassing mess. I don't mean just the code. I am going to clean it up and update it VERY soon.
9/2020 Did some work on cleaning up the post. I still need to do a number of edits on equipment and do a proper update.
NAME: Elgyn Tor
REAL NAME: Unknown
ALIAS: Chaos Maxtor
FACTION:
RANK: Master
SPECIES: Shi'ido-Gen’dai hybrid
AGE: 800+ years
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: Varies between 1.52 and 2.2 meters tall. (His physical limit)
WEIGHT: 113. Kg
EYES: Varies: Default Blue
HAIR: Varies, Default Black, long
SKIN: Varies. Usually a human pale Caucasian.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
The Physical:
1) Give him the helm at your own risk.
2) El is specialized in stealth, infiltration, melee combat and tactics. Though he has some minor skill in engineering some devices he is certainly no master mechanic or high level technician but is decently skilled in the development of various types of gadgetry as well as the inner workings of most star ships types.
3) Skinshifting: With centuries frozen in carbonite and kept on display as an art peice, Elgyn has been affected by an extended and unusual form of hibernation sickness. he has seemingly lost, be it permenate or temporary, his ability to retain large amounts of mass without pain.
The Mental
0.1) Sometimes, he just doesn't shut up.
1) Elgyn can be dawinistic in his views. Believing that those who are unable to adapt do not necessarily deserve what they strive for. Having lived for such a long time in an immobile limbo he has endless patience and hopes to see those who cannot adapt succeed in the time they are given.
2) Mental Flux-Elgyn is prone to moments of strange, disturbing or violent thoughts. If he acts on them is another matter.
3) Insecurity: Elgyn despised his natural form. Having been around humans for the majority of his life, Elgyn deeply prefers his human form only reverting to his alien self when he has no other choice. He views his natural self as ugly and monstrous.
Force Powers:
Breath Control
Combat Sense
Comprehend Speech
Conceal Alignment
Control Pain
Enhance Ability
Force Blast
Force Body
Force Cloak
Force Concealment
Force Drain
Force Healing
Force Jump
Force Lightning
Force Sense
Force Speed
Force Track
Force Weapon
Illusion
Induce Pain
Lightsaber Mastery
Mechu-deru
Meditative Trance
Mind Barrier
Mind Trick
Pyrokenisis
Sense Force
Sense Life
Telekinesis
Telepathy
Transfer Essence
Tutaminis
Proficiency level
Weak-Red
Average-Green
Strong-Silver
Mastered-Gold
APPEARANCE:
Lithe but oddly heavy, Elgyn's form can vary but normally takes the appearance of a human male in his mid to late twenties. His clothing, like his appearance, can vary. (Normally linked in a starting thread)
BIOGRAPHY:
Elgyn was the product of a mad man.
Designed and engineered by an insane Sith calling himself the Great Divine to be his weapon in a crusade against all Force-users, both Jedi and Sith alike, in the name of some obscure deity whom only the Great Divine witnessed. Elgyn’s first memories were waking up in a bacta tank, with no recollection of who he was or how he got there, fully grown (and quite possibly artificially aged). He broke out of the tank and the pod in which he was being held, escaping into a ship and slaughtering any who got in his way with his bare hands. He had no experiences or memories, only mental programming which was only half-successful. He had emotions, but no memories.
Some time after his escape, he [joined a pirate] fleet as the ship’s cook on one of the flagships. There he began to become… more. Through his adventures with the pirates, experiencing the world with fresh eyes, he grew. Meeting Arumi Zy among the fringe elements of the galaxy, Elgyn was eventually adopted into a clan of the nigh-extinct Mandalorian. Though he didn't necessarily see himself as Mandalorian, he did come to regard them as family and grew to respect their culture and customs (though he continues to butcher the language anytime he tries to speak it).
After some time, the Great Divine returned, leading an army called the Divine Order. He began his scourge of the galaxy—converting those who would follow, killing any who tried to oppose them. The presence of the Great Divine had an effect on Elgyn, activating his genetic memory engrams and awakening a pre-programmed personality which overtook him. Elgyn became a spectator in his own body—knowing what he was doing but powerless to stop it. He threw his signature cowl at Arumi’s feet and was made Lord Marshal of the Divine Order’s military and right hand to the Divine.
During a climactic battle on Bothawui, in the room of the tallest tower of the Divine’s fortress, the Divine was seemingly killed in a massive explosion. Elgyn barely managed to escape, though his body was pulverized to the point which he lapsed into a hibernation trance. With the Divine’s presence dissipated and the influence lifted, the crimes he’d committed against the Mandalorians and the people whom he had called friends—family—weighed on Elgyn, and he desperately went in search of redemption.
Soon after, he stumbled upon a mute though incredibly gifted mechanic named Zirk’a (and her astromech droid ‘translator’ Sixx), and after a particularly taxing mission in the Fringes, she joined him on his ship. Sometime later, after a few smuggling jobs and minor catastrophes, Elgyn found himself coming face-to-face with his past once again.
A strange Shi’ido approached him—a Sith warlock, obsessed with Elgyn and bordering on insane—by the name of Suul. Literally. He simply appeared, taking Zirk’a hostage and disappearing on his ship, leaving it up to Elgyn and Sixx to rescue her—but not before Suul could leave his mark on the hapless girl and entrap Elgyn in carbonite.
Preserved but still conscious Elgyn was sealed in a place he could not identify. Blind and deaf, over the course of thirteen years he began to revert back to his old shadow. With no sensory input for over a hundred years he redirected his mind outward with the Force and his mind became a deviant black thing. His mind twisted as he watched those he knew though the force in his frozen prison. Through the course of a thousand years he was shipped around as an art piece, thought to be an original from a line of carbonite carved body art. He would telekinetically interact with the world around him: his body preserved and his mind open through the Force. Sometimes he would haunt his owners through tricks and even small fires. Though eventually his envy and lust for flesh and emotional contact began to dawn on him. With gritted teeth he traveled for centuries eventually gaining the unintended title of "The Pale One" with a reputation of being violently haunted, Elgyn was sold to a high end museum on Courascant. [/SIZE]
Elgyn does not know who released him., most likely he would kill them later. But as he awoke and his stasis sickness wore away he kept only A flood of memories echoed in his mind. His heart echoed in the Force when he awoke. There was a girl, hair of red and a smile that brought serenity. A mandalorian who brought rage and a sith who gave brotherhood. But he still understood that centuries had passed. They had to be dead.
Elgyn was alone.
9/2020 Did some work on cleaning up the post. I still need to do a number of edits on equipment and do a proper update.
NAME: Elgyn Tor
REAL NAME: Unknown
ALIAS: Chaos Maxtor
FACTION:
RANK: Master
SPECIES: Shi'ido-Gen’dai hybrid
AGE: 800+ years
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: Varies between 1.52 and 2.2 meters tall. (His physical limit)
WEIGHT: 113. Kg
EYES: Varies: Default Blue
HAIR: Varies, Default Black, long
SKIN: Varies. Usually a human pale Caucasian.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
The Physical:
1) Give him the helm at your own risk.
2) El is specialized in stealth, infiltration, melee combat and tactics. Though he has some minor skill in engineering some devices he is certainly no master mechanic or high level technician but is decently skilled in the development of various types of gadgetry as well as the inner workings of most star ships types.
3) Skinshifting: With centuries frozen in carbonite and kept on display as an art peice, Elgyn has been affected by an extended and unusual form of hibernation sickness. he has seemingly lost, be it permenate or temporary, his ability to retain large amounts of mass without pain.
The Mental
0.1) Sometimes, he just doesn't shut up.
1) Elgyn can be dawinistic in his views. Believing that those who are unable to adapt do not necessarily deserve what they strive for. Having lived for such a long time in an immobile limbo he has endless patience and hopes to see those who cannot adapt succeed in the time they are given.
2) Mental Flux-Elgyn is prone to moments of strange, disturbing or violent thoughts. If he acts on them is another matter.
3) Insecurity: Elgyn despised his natural form. Having been around humans for the majority of his life, Elgyn deeply prefers his human form only reverting to his alien self when he has no other choice. He views his natural self as ugly and monstrous.
Force Powers:
Breath Control
Combat Sense
Comprehend Speech
Conceal Alignment
Control Pain
Enhance Ability
Force Blast
Force Body
Force Cloak
Force Concealment
Force Drain
Force Healing
Force Jump
Force Lightning
Force Sense
Force Speed
Force Track
Force Weapon
Illusion
Induce Pain
Lightsaber Mastery
Mechu-deru
Meditative Trance
Mind Barrier
Mind Trick
Pyrokenisis
Sense Force
Sense Life
Telekinesis
Telepathy
Transfer Essence
Tutaminis
Proficiency level
Weak-Red
Average-Green
Strong-Silver
Mastered-Gold
APPEARANCE:
Lithe but oddly heavy, Elgyn's form can vary but normally takes the appearance of a human male in his mid to late twenties. His clothing, like his appearance, can vary. (Normally linked in a starting thread)
BIOGRAPHY:
Elgyn was the product of a mad man.
Designed and engineered by an insane Sith calling himself the Great Divine to be his weapon in a crusade against all Force-users, both Jedi and Sith alike, in the name of some obscure deity whom only the Great Divine witnessed. Elgyn’s first memories were waking up in a bacta tank, with no recollection of who he was or how he got there, fully grown (and quite possibly artificially aged). He broke out of the tank and the pod in which he was being held, escaping into a ship and slaughtering any who got in his way with his bare hands. He had no experiences or memories, only mental programming which was only half-successful. He had emotions, but no memories.
Some time after his escape, he [joined a pirate] fleet as the ship’s cook on one of the flagships. There he began to become… more. Through his adventures with the pirates, experiencing the world with fresh eyes, he grew. Meeting Arumi Zy among the fringe elements of the galaxy, Elgyn was eventually adopted into a clan of the nigh-extinct Mandalorian. Though he didn't necessarily see himself as Mandalorian, he did come to regard them as family and grew to respect their culture and customs (though he continues to butcher the language anytime he tries to speak it).
After some time, the Great Divine returned, leading an army called the Divine Order. He began his scourge of the galaxy—converting those who would follow, killing any who tried to oppose them. The presence of the Great Divine had an effect on Elgyn, activating his genetic memory engrams and awakening a pre-programmed personality which overtook him. Elgyn became a spectator in his own body—knowing what he was doing but powerless to stop it. He threw his signature cowl at Arumi’s feet and was made Lord Marshal of the Divine Order’s military and right hand to the Divine.
During a climactic battle on Bothawui, in the room of the tallest tower of the Divine’s fortress, the Divine was seemingly killed in a massive explosion. Elgyn barely managed to escape, though his body was pulverized to the point which he lapsed into a hibernation trance. With the Divine’s presence dissipated and the influence lifted, the crimes he’d committed against the Mandalorians and the people whom he had called friends—family—weighed on Elgyn, and he desperately went in search of redemption.
Soon after, he stumbled upon a mute though incredibly gifted mechanic named Zirk’a (and her astromech droid ‘translator’ Sixx), and after a particularly taxing mission in the Fringes, she joined him on his ship. Sometime later, after a few smuggling jobs and minor catastrophes, Elgyn found himself coming face-to-face with his past once again.
A strange Shi’ido approached him—a Sith warlock, obsessed with Elgyn and bordering on insane—by the name of Suul. Literally. He simply appeared, taking Zirk’a hostage and disappearing on his ship, leaving it up to Elgyn and Sixx to rescue her—but not before Suul could leave his mark on the hapless girl and entrap Elgyn in carbonite.
Preserved but still conscious Elgyn was sealed in a place he could not identify. Blind and deaf, over the course of thirteen years he began to revert back to his old shadow. With no sensory input for over a hundred years he redirected his mind outward with the Force and his mind became a deviant black thing. His mind twisted as he watched those he knew though the force in his frozen prison. Through the course of a thousand years he was shipped around as an art piece, thought to be an original from a line of carbonite carved body art. He would telekinetically interact with the world around him: his body preserved and his mind open through the Force. Sometimes he would haunt his owners through tricks and even small fires. Though eventually his envy and lust for flesh and emotional contact began to dawn on him. With gritted teeth he traveled for centuries eventually gaining the unintended title of "The Pale One" with a reputation of being violently haunted, Elgyn was sold to a high end museum on Courascant. [/SIZE]
Elgyn does not know who released him., most likely he would kill them later. But as he awoke and his stasis sickness wore away he kept only A flood of memories echoed in his mind. His heart echoed in the Force when he awoke. There was a girl, hair of red and a smile that brought serenity. A mandalorian who brought rage and a sith who gave brotherhood. But he still understood that centuries had passed. They had to be dead.
Elgyn was alone.
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