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Approved Starship Choushin Class Generation 0 Oniwabanshū

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
5000m Average: 28
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Arboretum: A strange feature of a ship but something special to the Choushin. A garden that grows the uneti trees that function as command stations and semi living brains within the interior of the ships. The main garden of the first generation vessel grows seedlings that become the later generations and bond with their captains. Like Senoma is is connected to all of its children and its childrens children creating a hive mentality with the main as the queen. Allowing the vessels to find each other if under attack, share pain and information in a way that is difficult to hack or interpret by other computers and with the life stream Amnioid fluid is it much like a living being at the heart of the ship with an immune system of internal defenses designed to respond to threats.
  • Exotic Matter: The ethereal nature of the metal makes it near weightless despite being and looking dense within the pocket dimension of dream. In realspace it can be grasped and there is a steady supply able to be used by Krass. When experimenting with the extent the design that has been refitted.
  • Choushin Class Uneti: The heart of the ship and a gift from the commonwealth for the jedi in their forging. Krass has one of the younger generation trees installed allowing the jedi to contact without communications other choushin class ships.
  • Seven Points: Throughout the ship, the amnioid fluid flows like a bloodstream throughout it which is duel edged. It it like a circulatory system that keeps the techno-organic systems of the ship flowing and feeds into the seedlings that are being grown for children ships. It shares a mitochondrial cell connecting the ships to the mother and are organelles that will take in nutrients then break them down and create energy rich molecules for the ship. The seven main points are points that can be accessed to connects with the ship so it is always running smoothly.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard starfighter. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Kyberite: At the heart of the jedi fighter giving it a mini lightside nexus and aura that enhances the jedi ewithin and creates a small bubble making darkside influnece over the ships harder.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
    • Saotome Rhion: For the more limited production ships, the Rhion can upgrade and repair a ship by grabbing materials and breaking them down.
  • Lightside Aura: The choushin design is meant to make sure this is a lightside vessel. it radiates the lightside of the force to repel darksiders from entering and most who touch the darkside feel sick when inside of the ship. When on the ground it makes a bubble of force energy with the light about ten meters. The kyber crystal heart of the ship lets it emanate the force.
WEAKNESSES
  • Agena: Designed with the Agena to radiate the lightside of the force so that the academy is a beacon of the lightside to any and all force users.
  • Neural Net: THe neurral net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Protective Qualities: Largely non protective in qualities as it doesn't fully adhere to the rules of physics. The metal looks dense and like it would be highly protective but it isn't.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Force Nullification: Composed of solidified energy from a pocket dimension. Within a force nullification field it becomes heavy. The molecular structure is super dense but able to skirt and not adhere to physics like gravity normally. Without the force to preform this it becomes almost impossibly heavy to lift.
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Radiates the Lightside of the force like a beacon alerting others to its location.
  • Force Nullification: The ship is seeped in the lightside of the force and such it does not function well when the force is nullified. The choushin itself can be damaged or even die without the force over an extended period of time.
  • Orissa: Designed with the Orissa that is a solid plate covered in drop pods reducing underside defenses and cannon.
DESCRIPTION
Designed by the Atrsian Commonwealth based on several technologies and bio-technologies throughout the galaxy. To create a new type of ship in a process theorized by Saji Murasaki one of the Commonwealths xenobotanists. The process starting by entering splicing bora seeds with uneti seeds. From there the works on it allowed the seeds to be nourished and grow massive. Much like the library on Ahch-To with it that served to house the ancient texts of the jedi. So the size was possible, with the bora seeds it was able to bond to the initial shipbuilder. After they had bonded and after several days of solidifying that bond between them. The primary tree itself can control the seedlings that have bonded and reabsorb the detached ones that do not choose a captain to bond with in the ship. The selection process can be done monthly and it will take several weeks afterwards to grow the internal techno-organic areas of the ship. Externally in the drydocks the exoskeleton is being created like a standard starship albeit hollowed out.

The ship moved into a forging pit that was designed to nourish and grow the ship while the captain oversees and gets familiar with the exterior shell of it. Intense fire and energy is used to shape and mold the seed as it gets larger into a larve like form that continues to grow substantially larger. The larve form becomes the internal structure and design of the ship with the seedling tree being transferred inside to be bonded with it and the ship itself it moved to its shell. Systems are begun then to be molded into the ship with engines and hyperdrive, circuits and living quarters where needed. The final phases of it involved the admiral of the Atrisian naval fleets being suspended in the central chamber of the ship and bonding to it so that an almost telephatic link is created. the final phase then shapes the interior of the ship around the bondeds will so the internal configuration can differe from ship to ship but the exterior looks the same. Once the ship is done they stayed with the ship to solidify the bond between them.

The creation process and connection with the ship specifically as the primary Uneti tree grew within the center of the vessel allowed the Atrisian navy to start growing a new generation of ships that would and could be grown from its mother. The ship was called Oniwabanshū and deemed the first of the line but there was more going into it as Io explained from her father notes about the possibility. The ship would have a sort of hive mind similar to a bee hive.. with the precursor ship birthing many more and being connected all of them and sharing the connection throughout the generations down the line. The trees that act like command and control areas allowing the bonded captains and leader of the ship would become normal trees if removed from the ship and planted in the ground. A good way if they were damaged to save their lives but then they would never be able to be used in the ships again. The fluid that was used like life blood throughout the organic areas of the ship was proven to be vital but would also be dangerous since a powerful enough force user with time to concentrate on it could stop the flow and seize it for a short time. She pointed to old jedi records that showed a grandmaster being able to stall droids with in as long as she concentrated.

Once the major fights on Atrisia were done the ship was able to be brought out. Its growing cycles taking time and thanks to the massive creature it could grow being near the beasts belly and in his shadow. The crew working on it and within growing new seedlings into trees or bonding some with captains to start working on the next generation and class of ship. There would only be one progenitor type ship able to birth the others and the idea of making a small amount of garden type ships where specifically growing new trees and working at the drydocks would be important to make newer ships. Shuttles might be more tricky and fighter craft but they could used designed ship that they had set up for themselves. It couldn't be connected but that would be a good thing as destroyed fighters hurting the larger vessels with a bonded pain would be dangerous to ship performance.

The ships age and creation has been beneficial to the Atrisians... they have learned a lot more about what can be done and how to best treat theircreation. THe progenitor fo the line being one of the largest ships that they have in the system. With improvements to the technology they have been able to drastically improve the design giving the outer shell of it a more streamlined look that reflects its status and going more in line with their designs for the other ships that spawned from it. The Choushin line itself though has become something different with saplings being sent around the galaxy and for different ships that the jedi control. Using the collected stars to give a voice to it and the atrisian assembly to automate much of the ship to assist the organic pilots and crew they have been able to use and handle the depleted population.

Everythign about what they have done and what they could do with the ship has been to improve upon it and the newest technology in terms of weapons and defenses have been pushing it forward... advanced systems that will give it a tactical edge and robust hanger that is able to house the latest models of their ships using the best storage capabilities. With improved designs all around and advanced AI in the ship itself to handle and control the small fluctuations that might happen the Choushin class have been able to boost their effeciency by several factors compared to other ships of the line and add a new generation to Atrisia's arsenal.
 
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Junko Ike Junko Ike if you'd like to run this through the starship calculator posted in the starship template section, and make some adjustments feel free to do so. As it stands this is pretty underpowered, but let me know if you do make changes or decide not to make any changes to the ratings so I can move this over to approved for you. :)
 
Junko Ike Junko Ike - As it stands, your submission is underbalanced by a factor of Six. If you wished to retain the present rating scheme as is, you're welcome to do so. However, should you deign to increase any of the ratings - you'll have Six points to play with.

  • Sleg - Quintessence Power Source: A heavier battery designed to give off high levels of heat and energy. The sleg makes the repulsors highly explosive if they don't have an advanced heat sink installed.

Like your previous submissions, I don't see anything that justifies the use of Quintessence here. Without any exploration into the use of the material, we're forced to utilize established canon to draw a frame of reference from. As Quintessence was used to power the Starkiller weapon, which would likely require massive generators in which to harness, but transform this form of Dark Matter into something else - I don't feel as if a Capital ship on its own could handle, let alone house the necessary requirements to harness the near-limitless potential of Quintessence. At least through conventional and canon standards.

As it seems to be the only time it's ever mentioned in your submission - I would recommend removing the mention of it entirely.
 
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Removed it as it used to be the basis for first order technology from their armors and weapons but it looks like it was changed on the wookiee and yes the rating for now I would like to keep them as it for now.
 
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