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Approved Starship Choushin Class Generation 4 Rokujo Heavy Cruiser

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
1000m Average: 5
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Exotic Matter: The ethereal nature of the metal makes it near weightless despite being and looking dense within the pocket dimension of dream. In realspace it can be grasped and there is a steady supply able to be used by Krass. When experimenting with the extent the design that has been refitted.
  • Choushin Class Uneti: The heart of the ship and a gift from the commonwealth for the jedi in their forging. Krass has one of the younger generation trees installed allowing the jedi to contact without communications other choushin class ships.
  • Seven Points: Throughout the ship, the amnioid fluid flows like a bloodstream throughout it which is duel edged. It it like a circulatory system that keeps the techno-organic systems of the ship flowing and feeds into the seedlings that are being grown for children ships. It shares a mitochondrial cell connecting the ships to the mother and are organelles that will take in nutrients then break them down and create energy rich molecules for the ship. The seven main points are points that can be accessed to connects with the ship so it is always running smoothly.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard starfighter. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Kyberite: At the heart of the jedi fighter giving it a mini lightside nexus and aura that enhances the jedi ewithin and creates a small bubble making darkside influnece over the ships harder.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
  • Lightside Aura: The choushin design is meant to make sure this is a lightside vessel. it radiates the lightside of the force to repel darksiders from entering and most who touch the darkside feel sick when inside of the ship. When on the ground it makes a bubble of force energy with the light about ten meters. The kyber crystal heart of the ship lets it emanate the force.
WEAKNESSES
  • Agena: Designed with the Agena to radiate the lightside of the force so that the academy is a beacon of the lightside to any and all force users.
  • Neural Net: THe neurral net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Protective Qualities: Largely non protective in qualities as it doesn't fully adhere to the rules of physics. The metal looks dense and like it would be highly protective but it isn't.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Force Nullification: Composed of solidified energy from a pocket dimension. Within a force nullification field it becomes heavy. The molecular structure is super dense but able to skirt and not adhere to physics like gravity normally. Without the force to preform this it becomes almost impossibly heavy to lift.
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Radiates the Lightside of the force like a beacon alerting others to its location.
  • Force Nullification: The ship is seeped in the lightside of the force and such it does not function well when the force is nullified. The choushin itself can be damaged or even die without the force over an extended period of time.
  • Orissa: Designed with the Orissa that is a solid plate covered in drop pods reducing underside defenses and cannon.
DESCRIPTION
Designed as the frontline Chouushin ship. The backbone of the Atrisian fleet that is balanced, neither being heavy on attack or on fighters but instead being able to swarm around and work with the numbers. They can bring in smaller support vessels to back it up and reinforce its weaknesses on top of the more dedicated vessels that are larger. The internal garden in the central structure is more obvious and the design is on par with Junko's which took inspiration from the maladi class an ancient one sith vessel designed to be must stronger then its small size. In this case having varied shield with a lattice and overlapping back up made to keep them sturdy. The ability like the other ships to go planetside and become aquatic with deployable fighters or i space handle intense gravity and heat with solar shielding. The Rokujo is looking to become the main driving force to Atrisian defensive measures.

The main line ship from Atrisia based off of a combination design.. the ancient/old Maladi which was used to create the Kōgō Heika MK.II the personal vessel of Princess Junko. The design is solid and with advanced cannons on it they have been able to improve much more upon the design... giving it defensive features and armor as well as internal systems that few can rival. With it being deployed en-mass with the dragons fang and a small handful of other ships to patrol Atrisian space as well as aid in protecting the trade routes with herglic and other species the Commonwealth has been able to rebuild itself and restructure everything going into it.
 
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Junko Ike Junko Ike , as with the Kaede Destroyer, there are a number of items on here that are listed as "limited production", and this is a mass-produced ship.

It appears that the Saotome Circuits, Saotome Executive Internal Suite, Party Pack Battery, Defensive Party Pack Battery, Broadside Party Pack are all limited production submissions.

As always, we can simply remove them to keep this ship at mass production, or we can change the ship's production to limited.
 
Junko Ike Junko Ike -

  • Sleg - Quintessence Power Source: A heavier battery designed to give off high levels of heat and energy. The sleg makes the repulsors highly explosive if they don't have an advanced heat sink installed.

Like your previous submissions, I don't see anything that justifies the use of Quintessence here. Without any exploration into the use of the material, we're forced to utilize established canon to draw a frame of reference from. As Quintessence was used to power the Starkiller weapon, which would likely require massive generators in which to harness, but transform this form of Dark Matter into something else - I don't feel as if a Capital ship on its own could handle, let alone house the necessary requirements to harness the near-limitless potential of Quintessence. At least through conventional and canon standards.

As it seems to be the only time it's ever mentioned in your submission - I would recommend removing the mention of it entirely.
 
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