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Approved Tech "Cole" Custom Defender Droid

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Created By Damion Dorian's Father
  • Affiliation: Dorian And His Family
  • Market Status: Closed Market
  • Model: ZDD-1 (Zakuul Defender Droid)
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character)
  • Material:
    • DuraSteel
    • Cortosis (Inlayed and protecting Important Wires in a thin layer
    • Beskar (Beskar alloy Imbedded into the limbs and chest to beef up protection)
    • Songsteel (Small blades that retract from the droids arms, and Small ungual (Claw Bone) in the feet
    • Draconian Steel (Centered around joints of both the arms and legs, As well as many connecters around the droids thinner armor
      • Used only for repair and maintenance purposes, No real combat purposes
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Primary Programming (Class 4 Droid) Secondary Programming (Class 3)
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Height: Large (6'5)
  • Movement: Bipedal
  • Armaments:
    • Lightsaber Pike (Yellow Crystal from Damion's First saber)
    • Songsteel Blades that retract from the arms
    • Songsteel claw like blades near the ankles of the feet.
  • Misc. Equipment:
    • Holo-disk (Imbedded in right hand
    • Scomp Link (Imbedded into left hand)
    • Small Portable Energy Shield (Attached to Left Arm)
    • Emergency use Self Ray shield (Sends droid into A hibernation like state)
  • Resistances (Optional): This is suggested for Battle Droids and other Droids intended to participate heavily in direct combat. (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.) Resistance Ratings Extreme will require the submission to be Unique.
    • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): High, Due to the Materials Used to make the armor Plates.
    • Kinetic: Average, Nothing to counter Ballistics, but not weak on the subject
    • Lightsabers: Very High, The Beskar and Cortosis Combo was meant to deal with sith and Jedi
    • Other: Average
      • Sonic Biased attacks: Average -While not damaging to the Droid, it can stun the droid by making most of its sensors go off at once, causing to much input trying to be done at once
      • Ion/EMP: Low- Due to being a droid A good majority of it's systems will shut down in the even an ION or EMP attack hits
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Programmable In all form's of Combat (Melee or Ranged)
  • Able to hold It's own in fights with most average warriors, needing skilled Jedi, sith or mando's to take down
  • Agile and fast, despite its weight and size.
  • Imbedded Protocol Duty's and Simple labor, when needed
STRENGTHS
  • Protocol Duty's -While not as effecting as a dedicated Protocol droid, Most of the more common languages can be translated by the droid
  • Combat duty's -This droid's main purpose was combat as biased on Armor, and weapon Programing, It is very good at it
  • Simple Labor -As most droids are capable of simple labor such as moving heavy boxes, This droid can do just that and more
  • Durable- Because of the small amount of Beskar in the creation, this droid is very durable on the armor, and even the wires have some protection
  • Quick -The design was meant to counter the IG units across the galaxy, and agility would significantly help that
  • Some Tactile Ability -This droid was upgraded with better drives, and capacitors so it can handle more information on the battlefield
  • Undying Loyalty -Beit Programming, or free will, This droid Is highly loyal to the people that made him.
WEAKNESSES
  • Owner uses VERY sparely due to being a One of a kind
  • Droid Sentience- While not Real Sentience The droid does have life preservations programmed into it
  • Little Stealth-Due to the heavy mass of the droid, the droids feet clank on the ground making stealth a near imposable action
  • Expensive to Maintain -Even Light damage could cost a small fortune to fix up due to the rare materials
DESCRIPTION
This droid was Originally Meant to be Zakuul's Response to IG units in the galaxy, trying to make the perfect droid for war, The ZDD Project was proven to be to expensive to pull of. The design was meant to have Quality over quantity in mind, However It got to the point where Only One prototype was made and the project soon shut down after that being to expensive to maintain even the one Droid. However One of the benefactors saw the potential use of the droid and took it in. While the droids passed through 3 generations it was have many Upgrades in the years based on what would be needed at the time. Protocol Duty's and extra Combat duty's are just a few.

The Verity of Features Include
  • Basic Piloting
  • Protocol Duties
  • Basic Medical Knowledge
  • Basic Engineering
  • Melee and ranged combat
  • Light scouting
And many more. The rich family Bought all the upgrades needed and Would maintain it for the years to come. Currently It is in the hands of the Youngest in the family Damion Dorian
 
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Ravenfire

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Hi there I will be reviewing this sub today

To start with the image appears to have originated at Picture Link Here this link first so please either use that or the attached deviant art link.

Please link the small energy shield you reference in your Misc Equipment

In other you can add EMP/ION as its own rating and then tag it with the rating you feel is right.

Please expanded a bit on all of the Strengths and Weaknesses you've described.
 
Hello thank you for taking time to reveiw this Sub
1. Thank you for finding the link I was having trouble on finding where it was originally posted and Have changed It to represent the Correct place
2. I have now Linked the Energy Shield
3. I don't know exactly what EMP/ION as its own ranking means
4. Added some more explanation on the S And W
5. Fixxed 1 or two grammar errors
6. Changed Image But did Link where I got it from
 
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Ravenfire

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Excellent

So to the Ion/EMP being under other as different what I meant is like

Other:
Ion/EMP: Low
Temperature: High

As an example. Just like below other most people will stat out any extra ratings they feel the submission needs. So in your case it would be

Other:
Ion/EMP: Low
Sonic: Low

If that makes sense.
 
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