Count Reitor

[Count Reitor]

Name: Count Reitor (Chiss name=Rraak'Gleitrer'vuzo)
Faction: Chiss Ascendancy
Rank:
Species: Chiss
Age: 20
Sex: Male
Weight: 193 lbs
Height: 5'10
Eyes: Red
Hair: Black
Skin: Blue
Force Sensitive: No

Appearance: He is a short, fit and slightly skinny man who dresses in plain but expensive clothes. He is very fit because of his intense military training. His usual outfit is a black military jacket, black pants, and black gloves. There are red lines down the sleeves of his shirt and the legs of his pants. He wears tall, black boots. At his side is his slim, sleek blaster and his black, slim and shining vibro blade. He carries two small sickle like hooks, both black, on the back of his brown belt.
Strengths and Weaknesses:
+Strong
+Fast
+Cunning
+Good Shot
+Tactician
+Brave
+Calculating
-/+Arrogant
-/+Unloyal
-/+Proud
-/+Emotionless
-/+Intimidating
-Rash
-Headstrong
-Lack of Endurance
-Hates Humans

Biography:
He was born on Csilla into a rich military family and joined the Navy as soon as possible. He quickly became a pilot and soon got great political ties with a lot of wealthy and powerful people around the Galaxy. He became the heir to a influential noble family on Serenno. He is currently trying to become influential in Galactic affairs. (This will be edited and longer when I have time)
Ship: none so far
Friends:
Enemies:
Kills:

 

[Veliz Fett]

Intimidating can be a strength, and a weakness I would revise that to being both. Proud is also a one that can go both ways, and please explain why these are strengths, weaknesses, or both. As a role-player perspective, while it gives me a general idea of what your strengths and weaknesses are, there is pvp involved, I do not know exactly what to focus on if we were to have an encounter because half of your weaknesses have a good side to them that help like the two I have mentioned. Emotionless can also go both ways as well because during traumatizing moments or times of fear, it would not effect you. Unloyal is also something that can go both ways, because if your unloyal, while not being trustworthy, or a more likely hood to losing. You bail a lot quicker then normal, meaning if something is going bad you will run away from something bad before getting hurt, allowing you to survive. So in my opinion, you only have one, not so destructive weakness.

We all love our characters, but we cannot be gods starting out, or simply at all, the point of role playing is to have an untold good story. Is it a good story to have an almost unflawed character at start? No, one needs a balance to have fun, great growth, and story. Another rule of thumb is, would you like it if another character was almost unflawed? No, so while im not trying to troll or be mean, I am pointing out what exactly needs to be fixed. Please create a weakness that balances your character out, and while im not the boss, I suggest you edit the current things I have mentioned as well. This will make for a more fun, and more developable character, that you can enjoy shaping, but also that so others can enjoy interacting with him as well. Thank you for reading to this, and not taking to offense, what I have suggested. [member="Count Reitor"]

 

[Count Reitor]

I thought for a long time about what weaknesses I could give him, and I figured the ones listed were only weaknesses for a character like him. I will fix it anyway though. and thanks got letting me know!
[member="Veliz Fett"]

 

[Veliz Fett]

[member="Count Reitor"]

No problem, I am here to help bud .

 

[Veliz Fett]

[member="Count Reitor"]
Better improvement, good work . Lets rp, you can start up the thread pal .

 

[Count Reitor]

Sure, but do you have any ideas? [member="Veliz Fett"]

 

[Veliz Fett]

Are you the business type? Perhaps there is something we could trade with each other? Pay me to hunt, an animal or track a human? It really depends on what you want to get out of it. [member="Count Reitor"]

 

[Sebastian Santelli]

Interesting.

 

[Count Reitor]

I guess I could pay you to hunt down a bounty? Or maybe you are payed to kill me? [member="Veliz Fett"]

 

[Veliz Fett]

Remember, while I can hunt targets for money I prefer not to. I am more of a beast master, who can tame, or kill an animal, and then harvest it. I am a good sniper though, possibly you hate me for my success, and therefore want me dead? I am a good sniper, and tracker, that can live off the land, but I am also a merchant too. You could always attempt to arrest me for illegally hunting certain animals, that could make for a good thread.

[member="Count Reitor"]

 

[Count Reitor]

[member="Veliz Fett"] , yes that sounds like an awesome thread idea! I will make it now. How about I just sent in a squad to take you in alive for killing animals illegally.

 

[Veliz Fett]

[member="Count Reitor"]
surprise me