Approved Tech Crihls ritual armor.

[Darth crihl]

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• Intent: a personal armor for Darth crihl
• Image link: https://pin.it/7MUArMO
• Canon Link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vindican
• Permissions: n/a
• Primary Source: n/a

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Darth crihl
• Affiliation: Darth crihl
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: ritual armor
• Modularity: n/a
• Production: unique
• Material: armorweave, cortosis, sith runes, sith alchemy

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight: weightless
• Resistances:
  • Energy:very high
  • Kinetic: high
  • Lightsabers: very high
  • Other:
  • Emp/ion: none
  • Environmental: very high
  • Space: none
  • Sonic: average

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Sith runes of armor: these runes help boost the armorweave and are painstakingly put on every strand of weave boosting rather suboptimal armorweave to power armor level of heights.
• Sith alchemy: used in making the cortosis more resilient against Lightsabers.
• Can be repaired using the darkside of the force

STRENGTHS

• Lightsaber Resistance: due to the cortosis and sith runes the armor is Lightsaber Resistant.
• Blaster resistant: the armor weave cortosis and sith runes protect against blaster fire.

WEAKNESSES

• Force dependent: without the force the armor loses some of its protection and all its force related boons.
• Immense darkside aura: the armor due to being embued with sith runes and alchemy cant be hidden from other force users and can be felt for miles or even from the otherside of a planet.

DESCRIPTION
The armor was made by Darth crihl heavily using the darkside and painstaking detail. With every facet of its creation down to everyweave using the force to put the armor together using the blood of ten sith enemies to paint on the sith runes. Infusing them with his own force energies taking months to make and can be repaired using the darkside of the force. Although appearing cloth on the outside it contains cortosis plates within the weave hiding it from view. The sith runes throughout are well hidden on the inside of the armor.

 

[Felix Aquila]

Hi, I'm Felix and I'll be judging your item here Darth crihl

 

[Felix Aquila]

Your image source:

A link would suffice, you don't need to post the picture twice. Also remember that the intent of the image source area is to credit the original, in this case SWTOR, so a link to their official website or something to credit the source of the image would also suffice. As there's no artist per-se

• Manufacturer: kintik tsawak

Please link manufacturer

• Affiliation: (Individual Character Name (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), Company Name(s) (Companies authorised to use this submission), Faction Name(s) (Factions authorised to use this submission), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group.)

you have not filled this section out

• Model:

Or this, simply a technical model name if there is one, you can put N/A or just list the same name.

• Production: unique
• Material: armorweave, cortosis, sith runes, sith alchemy

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Multipurpose
• Weight: weightless
• Resistances:
  • Energy:very high
  • Kinetic: average
  • Lightsabers: very high
  • Other:
  • Emp/ion: none
  • Environmental: average
  • Space: none
  • Sonic: none

you are 5 points underpowered with its current statistics. 3x none values as weaknesses are 9 points and unique makes -13. 2x very high, 1x high and 1x extreme is 8 points. You can make them up by lessening those weaknesses if you like.

• Sith runes of power: these runes can be used to empower his force powers and techniques. Also allows him to use sith sorcery and majick without needing multiple sith artifacts on hands.

I really dont like how vague this is. The armour just allows you to use whatever spells you like? Does it require the user to even be force sensitive? If so, this is probably going to be a no. This needs limitations and definition if its going to be allowed. Sorry. Most of these are also strong enough to be considered strengths, so, feel free to go into greater detail in that section.

 

[Darth crihl]

There I think I fixed mostly everything Felix Aquila

 

[Felix Aquila]

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