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Approved Planet Crispor

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Crispor
  • Demonym: Crisporian
  • Region: Mid Rim.
  • System Name: Cisp
  • System Features:
  • 1 Sun
  • 2 Moons - Emonti - Hypermatter Gas Moon
  • Talaz - Forest Moon
  • Location: AE 32 on the mara corridor
  • Major Imports: Food, Labour, Ores
  • Major Exports: Hypermatter, Electronics, Tibanna
  • Unexploited Resources: Lightsaber Crystals
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Frozen
  • Primary Terrain: Tundras, Glaciers, Frozen Oceans.
  • Atmosphere: Type IV.
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Reburn
  • Planetary Features: Bio Domes dotted across the planet with sealed train ways connecting them all together. The planet is primarily Wild.
  • Major Locations:
Exterior
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Interior Corridors
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Sleeping Quarters
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Reburn - Capital City of Crispor which is majorly run by a mining company that collects the Hypermatter from the nearby moon and Tibanna from the planet itself. Due to the atmosphere the city is within a bio dome. This biodome has limited spacing for only company miners and their families. This is due to no one ever visiting Crispor's surface.
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Tibanna Fields - The fields of Tibanna that the company uses as part of their fuels for ships among other things. Often see miners over them during the day.
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Some kind of crashed ship - It is unknown what who or why this ship crashed. However the company also makes sure their miners and any offworlders don’t go near it. However near the ship is a lightsaber crystal cave that Sylas Taff found his crystal within.
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Old House Io Tower - The building was left from the Silver Jedi taking over Crispor, after the owners, the House of Io moved out the whole place was left mostly abadonded with the Company have no need of it for the time being but power still exists within the structure and it is still completely habitable inspite of all the damage caused to it by the Silver Jedi at no point did they breach the atmosphere of the tower thus it could be rebuilt.
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Orbital Fuel Station Crentic - The refueling station above the planet that the company uses to sell it’s fuel and wares. It is largely automated however there is also a small bazaar on board as well that one can stop in.
POPULATION

  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species: Human, Kiffar, Chiss, Hapan, Miraluka, Other.
  • Population: Sparse
  • Demographics: It is whoever the company hires, the company doesn’t stand for racism or xenophobia. Plus all the miners after a while start treating each other as family.
  • Primary Languages: Galactic Basic
  • Culture: Work Hard for your company day in and day out. Treat each other as family. Don’t do anything against the company. Stay safe.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Company Council
  • Affiliation: Avalon Wellsprings Industry
  • Wealth: Medium. This is due to the amount the company pays the miners to live on the planet as well as the fact that it is on the Mara Corridor allowing many ships to refuel.
  • Stability: High. Outsiders are allowed however many don’t visit the planet. The company appears to keep a tight grip on everything occurring on the planet at least within the biodomes.
  • Freedom & Oppression: It is ruled rather tightly by the company that owns it. There is no freedom once you are on planet. You work for the company and you get paid for it. There is nothing illegal generally as long as it doesn’t affect company business.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The planet is completely demilitarised as the company seriously doubts anyone would attack a planet that is unbreathable atmosphere. However there is a small navy protecting the refueling satellite the company holds above the planet.
  • Technology: Galactic Standard
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The planet was always present along the mara corridor however many people just passed by it as the atmosphere was less than promising. However shortly after the gulag plague with many newer factions coming about and the galaxy being split between so many people companies that wanted to remain neutral found it harder and harder to find planets that could remain stable as neutral with spaceship reserves.

So it was that Avalon Wellsprings industry took a chance on the planet noticing the gas moon nearby being a perfect for collecting hypermatter. Tapping into the planet they found lakes of Tibanna that had went unused due to the planets atmosphere and soon began construction on mining platforms as well as biodomes for the miners to live in on the planet.

They continued like this for a long time. Eventually a ship crashed and parties were sent out to explore it however many never returned and those that did spoke of some kind of dangerous creature on the ship as such the company made the area of limits.

However Sylas Taff did a journey out to the area many years later finding a lightsaber crystal cave which contained it’s own unique crystal. Sylas took a number of the crystals and made a note of the location before the leaving the planet once more. However when he left he made a note the company was not doing so well anymore and that something else could possibly be going on.

House Io at some point built a tower on the surface of Crispor, having paid off the Avalon Wellsprings Industry to create such a place on the surface. The Silver Jedi came claiming that Crispor fell under their jurisdiction and attacked the tower of House Io, leaving it habitable but in a bad condition. The company largely decided to stay out of the conflict as it was bad for business whichever way they fell and as such just agreed to be under the Silvers protection after House Io left and now with the Silvers gone the company has gone back to treating everything as normal.
 
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[member="Sylas Taff"] Overall, this is pretty good! I like the open-ended possibility of an adventure springing up here and the new scenery it offers. I would only remind that should any "rare" ores pop up, or if the Avalon Wellsprings Company ever gets subbed, that a Submission Modification should be completed to adjust those items. It seems like there is plenty of room to grow here in the future so please don't hesitate to use it, especially, if events impact the history, locations, or their way of life.

My only small question is on the System:

You have it listed as:

System Name: Cisp

Was that deliberate or should it be Crisp?
 
Changelog:
Fixed the overall submission template to fit into the new template.
Added a new location, a new link to the dom and more historical information to fit what happened during the dominion of the planet.
Changed a number of pictures and their links as several of them broke.
Updated several links.

Ready to be Rejudged.
 
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