Critique and Judgments.

[Vakarian]

The title really says it all.

I want your Critique and Judgment on my characters if you have RP'd with them, or have read posts that I have written. I want your judgments on me as a writer and my writing ability. I am fully aware of what I am asking and I will openly admit that I am incredibly leery of doing this because of all the written attacks on other people that I have seen.

I am also entering this fully aware that I am subjecting myself to open criticism and judgements from community of strangers that I do not know. I also am aware that a good many of you may have not RP'd with me or taken particular notice of me throughout my time here; I mean, I'm not quite active around the entirety of the board - usually limiting myself to certain areas.

So, all that said, have at it. Serious answers only. No salt taken in anything said. Honesty is preferred, no matter how brutal. \

Hell, feel free to judge my Character Biography if you so wish.

 

[Mara D'Lessio Merrill]

[member="Máni"]

I quite enjoy writing with you. Good character, good insight, good description. If you're looking for something more constructive than just praise, I've noticed that you use 'smiled softly' or 'soft smile' often enough that it becomes noticeable/distracting. Becoming more aware of your own habits and overused phrases is a great way to raise your game painlessly.