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[Matthew Locke]

Hello,

I have been writing on and off for 4 years, and just would like some feedback.

• Matthew Locke
  • Roads Untravled
  • Leading the "Wise"
• Darth Arkanus / Dral the Broken
  • The Day the World Stood Still
  • Suffocating Sight
  • Clubbers
  
  And there is more, these are just what I can find quickly.

 

[Aayla Shan]

Certainly looks solid to me, I used

• Roads Untravled

As a reference. I like how your portray the humanity of him, and overall how you kinda breathe an aura to the environment. Beyond that, I am kinda' stunned I didn't realize you and the other Locke were actually related. Guess that's what I get for being a newbie here.

In any case, from what I can see I'd be honored to write with either of you. Good stuff. If that's how well you do after four years, you're gonna' be goated in no time.