Critique my Bio

[Syss Rembala]

Greetings, my friends.

Making character sheets is an activity I deeply enjoy, to the point of visiting my own bio almost on a daily basis just to see what I can change/add/remove, to make it better. Now that I've returned, I want to improve Syss' bio and so I figured your opinion will help.

I accept suggestions regarding every aspect of the bio: writing, content, display, information to add, remove or change. Anything you can think of.

I urge you to be as honest as possible.

Thanks!

 

[Sena]

Looks good. The only thing that I would suggest personally (something that I do and have been doing since I started back in the day), is instead of using words to describe the level of your skills, I would use a loading bar type thing such as what I use in my character sheet:

To me (once again this is just personal) it is a bit more neat and requires less explaining as it has the ability to scale your skill in abilities to a finer detail.

If you wouldn't mind throwing me a critique as well, it would be much appreciated

[member="Syss Rembala"]

 

[Syss Rembala]

I like it, its much more practical, representative of the skills and aesthetically pleasing.

Thank you, [member="Sena"].

 

[Jsc]

[member="Syss Rembala"] - Well composed, gleefully structured, and colorfully presented. A solid 9/10.

 

[Jartris Entumaa]

[member="Syss Rembala"]

Honestly, monospaced typeface, centred alignment, and low contrast make this an utter pain in the eye to read.

 

[Jen]

[member="Syss Rembala"]
Content wise it seems pretty good.
Personally I would downscale the character picture at the start or move it to the right like it is in my own.


The secret is now bestowed onto you, to move your picture inbetween text you use the

 [float=right] insert picture here [/float]

 

[Syss Rembala]

You've no idea how many times I've tried and failed to do that. Thank you!

[member="Jen"]

 

[Sena]

I decided to check in since you'd gotten some ideas and see what and how you implemented things. Looks REALLY nice now, good job.

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