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Critique My Character

Hey, Rex/Vex/James here whatever you wanna call me is cool. I brewed up my first character a while ago and I wanted to get some opinions on his personality, history, all that. It's done in most regards, but I'm still filling in a few sections I added myself (Miscellany, Equipment, Abilities, etc.)

I'm thinking of completely rewriting his history and making it much more elaborate, so any advice or critiques there would be hugely appreciated. Don't be afraid to go ham on me if you see something wrong or that you don't like. Advice anywhere else is greatly appreciated as well. Thanks ahead of time.

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