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Critique the Duchess Part II

Yoru Shakou

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I posted such a thread earlier, though not many people had posted replies or critiques upon it. I was though still interested in what people though of the Duchess as well as her involvement with the Avidonian Dominion and in general the character herself.
I know that I am not by far the best writer and I feel that it would help in pushing the character forward to develop her more.
It is just that simple. Let me know what you think about the character and how you feel I could do better or in general do more with her.
 

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