Critique the Frost Elf

[Kaida Taldir]

Well, I already asked for critiques of Siobhan, my oldest character on the site, a long time ago. So I guess it's fitting to do the same for Kaida. Totally not jumping on the bandwagon.


The character's been around for a bit, though she only really started taking off a bit more than a year ago since I struggled with writing her before. She's been deliberately written to be an inversion of Siobhan in many ways, though hopefully she's more than a foil!


So tell me what you think.


Some recent threads:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/44691-the-terror-from-beyond-2-lets-punch-out-cthulhu-wide-open/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/50731-return-of-the-klaxxi-op-dominion-of-sullust/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/50906-each-days-a-gift-and-not-a-given-right/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53518-first-contact-levantine-sanctum-dominion-of-tygara/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/67571-exodus-ssc-dominion-of-tygara/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/69373-if-i-were-wrong-id-know-it/


Hmm. Upon reflection, these threads are almost all rather long. Sorry about that.

 

[Coci Heavenshield]

[member="Kaida Taldir"]

All your characters are strong, but you play their weaknesses without hesitation which makes them interesting to read. Kaida is one of those. As you know I have more connection with Sio in one form or other, and she has moved away in a different direction which is great to be involved with as well.

I look forward to more RP with you no matter the character, well not the spooky one, and you know who I mean..