Critique Yourself - Peanut Gallery & Comments

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This is the commentary thread created alongside Valien's Critique Yourself. GIFs, lols, smiles, jokes, and general shenanigans may follow.

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To begin.

• Cira and Sarge are the cutest /weirdest /strangest thing on the internet ever. (Even more than kittens.)
• Sio is just too darn sexy a character for her writer's own good. (Stop hurting my Sio, Sio.)
• And Braith sent me into a food/death spiral of depression after mentioning Corvus. (The feelz.)

Also. Why do so many people like writing romances and I hate it! Blarggg. *death* *feelz* *ben & jerrys* *dice?*

 

[Matreya]

Romance is fun. Some go the extra...ahem, mile if you will. But so long as it is in good taste, the extra mile is OK. Such as Danger and what's his face. I think the chars are a good match together.

And despite everything, Damien and Deneve I find to be a good match too! Though there was that joke about hitting on Isley's woman...

But that's a different topic!

Also, Sio? Meh. Could leave it. LOL

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Kana Truden"]
You can be confident in your sexuality I guess because like me, your ladies end up loving other ladies.

 

[Iestyn Nova]

your ladies end up loving other ladies.

Men writing ladies who love other ladies? This doesn't seem like something that would happen on a roleplay board!?

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Iestyn Nova"]
Uh huh.

 

[Dune Rhur]

Romance is really dumb. If you have feelings for someone, tell them through telepathy and bring them a rare pontite crystal! For our ever-growing, flip-flopping Jedi-turned-Sith community, remember to whine and whinge because you have emotions that no one understands! If you've always been a Snidely Whiplash villain/Dark Side baddie, kidnap your prospective love interest. Nothing says I love you like waking up in the trunk of a car, hands/feet/other appendages tied up and mouth duct taped. Or train tracks if you're a fan of the classics.

 

[Sarge Potteiger]

Cira and Sarge are the cutest /weirdest /strangest thing on the internet ever. (Even more than kittens.)

 

[Cira]

Side note. Is it just me or does [member="Cira"] beat people into becoming better writers?

My whip is always ready!

 

[Rusty]

My whip is always ready!

Don't you threaten me with a good time.

[member="Cira"]

 

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