Custom Firespray-class patrol and attack ship

[Jai Katan]

Affiliation: Personal

Manufacturer: Kuat Systems Engineering (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kuat_Systems_Engineering)
Model: Firespray-class Attack and Patrol ship
Modularity: Weapons are interchangeable/removable for more speed
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, Crystasteel viewport, titanium-reinforced alusteel alloy, Anti-Ionization mesh under outer shell
Classification: Atmospheric starfighter
Length: 21.5 meters
Height: 7.8 meters
Width: 21.3 meters

Armament: 14

-2 blaster cannons;
-2 laser cannons;
-minelayer;
-Dymek Concussion Missiles;
-Ion Cannon;
-Proton torpedoes, Max 10;


Defenses: 14
Special Features:

Anti-ionization Mesh

Tractor beam

Prisoner cages

Ion cannon



Maneuverability Rating: 8

Speed rating: 3

Hyperdrive Class: 1.0

Strengths:

+Disguise: people tend to underestimate Firesprays because of their usual unassuming appearance.
+speed: just under the Millennium Falcon, this is one of the fastest ships in the galaxy
+firepower: this ship has extremely strong Firepower, and can take down a Correlian Corvette, and slightly incapacitate a Star Destroyer.
Weaknesses:

-size: stealth is a problem for Firesprays, as they are too big to evade scanners
-stealth: another reason stealth is bad for these is because firesprays are not manufactured with stealth field generators.
-limited Hyperspace Jumps: the Firespray's hyperdrive is limited to jumps of less than 950 light years.
-limited crew capacity: The ship can only hold 4 people comfortably
-limited consumable storage: It can only hold enough food for 1 day's rations for four people, so that makes for limited trips.
-mesh Misplacement: the Anti-ionization mesh is not quite complete in some areas, leaving a well-placed shot a chance at crippling the ship
-heat: The cabin can get uncomfortably hot at some times, due to a malfunction in the manufacturing.


Description: Firesprays were originally designed as Police Ships for Kuat's home defense, but were considered too lightly armed for police work. Firesprays are equipped to hold 2-4 people as crew, but this ship has been modified to have prison lockers in the back, but they're cramped to say the least.

The heavy firepower is perfect for bounty hunters such as Jai, and the minimal crew space is good for working alone. The Anti-Ionization mesh protects the ship from getting it's technology disabled by ion Blasts.
The concussion missiles can deactivate the shields of a light cruiser, or heavy corvette.
The Firespray has a rotating cockpit capsule that keeps the pilot and copilots upright at all times, with fins that are equipped with repulsorlifts to assist in that area.

Development Thread: If Necessary

Intent: To bring a canon ship into Chaos, and create a custom ship for Jai

Who Can Use This: Jai Katan

 

[inactivechar01]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[inactivechar01]

Maneuverability Rating: 8 Speed rating: 18

+speed: just under the Millennium Falcon, this is one of the fastest ships in the galaxy

This contradicts. I believe you have mistakenly inverted the scale found here.

Strengths:
+Disguise: people tend to underestimate Firesprays because of their usual unassuming appearance. +speed: just under the Millennium Falcon, this is one of the fastest ships in the galaxy +firepower: this ship has extremely strong Firepower, and can take down a Correlian Corvette, and slightly incapacitate a Star Destroyer.

Weaknesses:
-size: stealth is a problem for Firesprays, as they are too big to evade scanners
-stealth: another reason stealth is bad for these is because firesprays are not manufactured with stealth field generators.

The weaknesses do not balance out the strengths. The strengths are waaay above the limit.



All in all, I think it will be best if you go by the template found here - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81773-starship-information-template/?p=1203429


I like customized canon ships and I would love seeing this being special and all considering it is unique but there is some work to be done for us to achieve that!

Do ask any questions you may have for me here.

[member="Jai Katan"]

 

[Jai Katan]

[member="Kad Forgrin"] thanks for telling me about the speed thing, I read it wrong. Will the modified weaknesses work?

 

[inactivechar01]

[member="Jai Katan"]

+Disguise: people tend to underestimate Firesprays because of their usual unassuming appearance.

-size: stealth is a problem for Firesprays, as they are too big to evade scanners -stealth: another reason stealth is bad for these is because firesprays are not manufactured with stealth field generators. -limited Hyperspace Jumps: the Firespray's hyperdrive is limited to jumps of less than 950 light years. -limited crew capacity: The ship can only hold 4 people comfortably -limited consumable storage: It can only hold enough food for 1 day's rations for four people, so that makes for limited trips.

I would ask for these to be removed since, in my opinion, they are redundant.

and can take down a Correlian Corvette, and slightly incapacitate a Star Destroyer.

Also, please tone the description down a bit on it's firepower capabilities.


Right now, we're looking at a gunship fast as an X-Wing capable of surviving heavy damage and also delivering tons of damage while its maneuverability is that of a frigate.

I'd ask for a speed rating of 4 and maneuverability of 6 along with a 10 post development thread.

 

[Jai Katan]

[member="Kad Forgrin"] can we just archive this for now? I'm a little bit busy and don't really have the time for a thread. Thanks though!

 

[inactivechar01]

Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Raziel, Braith Achlys, or Cira.