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Approved Tech CZ-717 Sniper Rifle

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"Sci Fi sniper Rifle" by Gianluca Romeo @ Artstation.com
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To create a high-tech Sniper Rifle
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Canon Link: N/A
Restricted Missions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Zaz Tal'Verda
Model: CZ-717 Sniper Rifle
Affiliation: Jhiaga Shiwr
Modularity: None
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, Plasteel, Transparisteel, Power Cell

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Slugthrower
Size: Handheld, two hands.
Length: 1.6M
Weight: 25Kg
Ammunition Type: 15mm Sluground
Ammunition Capacity: 5 Round Capacity
Effective Range: 2000M, Battlefield
Rate of Fire: Automatic, Bolt Action

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Automatic Bolt Action: When the weapon's systems are offline the bolt has to be manually engaged. However, when it is fully operational and relying on it's more complex systems it has an automatic function.
  • MFTAS
  • Camo Netting Compartment
  • Extendable Tripod
  • DC-17 blaster hidden in the buttstock.
  • Cooldown Bypass
Strengths:
{+} You can't miss: This sniper rifle comes with all of the bells and whistles needed to effectively take out your target. An integrated targeting computer, motion detection technology, as well as several inclement weather and site disruption countermeasures make the weapon that much more deadly.

{+} EMP, no sir: Although the weapon has a power cell and several systems that route power from the cell it can function after being target by EMP and ION technology, however the advanced systems will fail and the shooter will have to rely on the base function of the weapon.

{+} Minimal kick: Because of the size and weight of this weapon it has a low amount of kick for it's size, especially when used in a supported position.

Weaknesses:
{-} This sucker is heavy: The sniper rifle is extremely heavy because of the added functions and technology stuffed into the weapon.

{-} Some assembly Required: The weapon is not meant to be left in it's assembled position. To change the power cell the rifle has to be completely disassembled, this is also necessary for travel.

{-} Slow and Steady: The CZ-717 has a seven second cooldown in between shots, there is a way to bypass that cool down however excessive bypassing {more than twice within a twenty minute timeframe} can overheat the weapon to the point of shutting down. With the bypass the weapon can fire ever three seconds.


DESCRIPTION
The CZ-717 was made by Zaz Tal'verda during his time in The Dominion. Because of his inexperience and lack of skill with a sniper rifle he created a weapon that had more advanced functions to assist with the task. Taking the same technology utilized in his helmet, he created a sensor and targeting system that made sniping much easier. However, the man got rather carried away and created a weapon that was exceedingly heavy, causing it to be less practical in battlefield environment.
 

Netherworld

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<p>Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.</p>
 

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Zaz Tal'Verda said:
Ammunition Type: 10-15mm Sluground
  • Slugthrowers are chambered for rounds of certain size – how does this work?


Zaz Tal'Verda said:
Rate of Fire: Automatic Bolt Action
  • Pick one or the other, both don't work together. It's either bolt action or semi-automatic.


Zaz Tal'Verda said:
several inclement weather and site disruption countermeasures
  • What are these countermeasures supposed to be?


Zaz Tal'Verda said:
{+} No kick: Because of the size and weight of this weapon it has next to no kick.
  • Tone this down, please. Despite its weight, the weapon would have an appreciable amount of recoil given the size of the round it fires.


Zaz Tal'Verda said:
however excessive bypassing can overheat the weapon to the point of shutting down.
  • This is too vague. What qualifies as 'excessive bypassing'? The way it's currently written, the writer could ostensibly claim to bypass all the time, effectively negating this weakness altogether.

@mention me with questions or edits.
 
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Netherworld said:
Pick one or the other, both don't work together. It's either bolt action or semi-automatic.
  • I should have expanded on this, when the weapon's systems are offline the bolt has to be manually engaged. However, when it is fully operational and relying on it's more complex systems it has an automatic function. Would this be ok?


Netherworld said:
several inclement weather and site disruption countermeasures
  • The different sight adjustments that come with the MFTAS.

Updated and ready for review again [member="Netherworld"]
 

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Zaz Tal'Verda said:
Rate of Fire: Automatic,@Netherworld@Netherworld Bolt Action
  • Seems like you put two tags in there by accident?


Zaz Tal'Verda said:
I should have expanded on this, when the weapon's systems are offline the bolt has to be manually engaged. However, when it is fully operational and relying on it's more complex systems it has an automatic function. Would this be ok?
  • For RL slugthrowers that'd be a negative, since those are two completely different designs, but for SW tech, that seems doable. Please add this explanation to the submission.
 
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