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Approved NPC Daniel Eversman

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Wandering Naval Officer
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Name: Colonel Daniel Eversman
Loyalties: First Order Army, Aran Piett
Role: Stormtrooper Detachment Commander

Development Threads: N/A

Age: 45
Species: Human/Imperial/Dosuun

Appearance: Eversman stands about 5'10, has black hair, and blue eyes. Though rarely seen without his helmet. He is a grizzled officer, his armor having many scars from the combat he has been in. His armor is the standard white like most of his troopers so no one can pick him out. Eversman though keeps the scars his armor has gained through his tours of duty, but he does keep the armor as clean as possible as well. He also has a scar over his left eye from a combat action most have forgotten or perished in.

Personality: A very grizzled veteran, he leads from the front, and takes nothing from anyone. He can be very hard on his soldiers in his command but this is due to him seeing too much war in his life. Though not directly under Piett's command he still respects the ideas the Naval Captain give him when setting out for a deployment. He treats he soldiers like they are family and would do anything to make sure they all come home alive or dead.

Force Sensitivity: N/A

Weapon of Choice: F-11D Blaster Rifle

Skills: Skilled army commander, blaster rifle marksman

Wealth: Standard for a Army Colonel

Combat Function: Stormtrooper detachment commander for the stormtroopers stationed on Aran Piett's flag ships. Eversman leads them in boarding actions, as well as planetary assaults.

Notable Possessions: N/A

History: Growing up in a military family, all Daniel knew was war. His family can trace their lines back to Imperial military officials from the Galactic empire. So when the First Order came around looking for families to volunteer their children for the Stormtrooper program, Daniel's family sent him off. Being trained as an officer for the Stormtrooper corps he kept showing how he was an exceptional leader. He rose through the ranks to Colonel, where at that point he felt comfortable staying. He was hand picked by Captain Aran Piett to lead the trooper detachment aboard his Star destroyer.


Intent: Stormtrooper detachment commander for Aran Piett's Naval Forces

​Image Credit: http://www.aveleyman.com/FilmCredit.aspx?FilmID=6609
 
This looks good to go to me. There are just a few grammar-related things I'll give you the chance to correct before I stamp this.



Aran Piett said:
Though not directly under Piett's command he still respects the ideas the Naval Captain give him went setting out for a deployment.
*When



Aran Piett said:
He treats he soldiers like they are family and would do anything to make sure they all come home alive and the dead.
Do you mean dead or alive?



Aran Piett said:
Being trained as a officer for the Stormtrooper corps he kept showing how he was a exceptional leader.
Really minor, but should be 'an' in both cases.

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