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Dark!Aria

Hi, folks. So, since I last did one of these, Aria left the Jedi, fell (or is falling) to the Dark Side, and is currently getting her act together with the help of a bunch of Sith. Now seems like a pretty good time to ask for criticism/advice/whatever, so here we are. All and any feedback is welcome, but please try to be nice.

Character bio can be found, shockingly, right where it says 'Character Bio'. :p Do your worst.
 
[member="Aria Vale"]

Great.

I thought i'd kick this off by saying I love Aria's story so far it's so fluid, real, and deeply emotional. The fall to the dark side is well done and since it's gradually being done it makes it all the more real. I'm ecstatic to be part of her great story!
 

Darth Imperia

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I, like [member="Artemis Lux"] above me, adore you and the character.

Dark Aria is exceptionally well written, I think - so many people fall into the trap of a complete, 180 moral turnaround (myself included on occasion), so it's nice to see you taking it nice and slow with Aria.
 

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