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Approved Tech Darth Abaddon's Lightsaber (Wûzêansi)

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Wûzêansi
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Out of Character Information:

Intent: The personal weapon of Aitir Kor'sa/Darth Abaddon
Image Source: Link
Canon Link: Lightsaber (x)
Primary Source: Same as canon link



Production Information:
Manufacturer: [member='Aitir Kor'sa'] Darth Abaddon
Affiliation: [member='Aitir Kor'sa'] Darth Abaddon [member='Nasosûtoi']
Model: N/A
Modularity: Crystals/Circuitry/Components (yes)
Production: Unique (one of a kind)
Material: Qixoni Crystalhttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Qixoni_crystal, Circuitry, Leatheris (wrap), Ultrachrome



Technical Specifications:
Classification: Lightsaber
Size: Average
Weight: Medium



Special Features:
Qixoni Crystal (imbues the wielder with a significant boost to their abilities in the Force as well as adding power and strength to the weapon's blade itself)
Leatheris Wrap (wrapped around portions of hilt and covering Ultrachrome. wraps serve two purposes: 1 - comfort grip on weapon, 2 - pad to shield momentarily from heat should the Ultrachrome hilt be struck with enough lightsaber energy to force it to super-heat and melt)
Ultrachrome Hilt (initially lightaber resistant, but if enough energy from a lightsaber blade is applied to strike to hilt, will cause the hilt to super-heat and a melt)
Unstable Appearance (the red blade emitted from hilt has an unstable and faltering appearance)



Description:
This lightsaber has been masterfully crafted and attuned to the wielder. Wûzêansi was made several years after Aitir's fall to the Dark Side of the Force after being possessed by the spirit of the Sith Lord, Darth Abaddon, thus becoming the new Darth Abaddon. The unstable nature of the blade reflects the inner turmoil of the Jedi that fights within to rid themselves of the spirit that possesses and controls them. It is as much an alliteration of the internal struggle of the wielder as it is for the nature of appearance.

Blade Length: 42 inches (106.68 cm)
Hilt Length: 16 inches (40.64 cm)
Total Length: 58 inches (147.32 cm)



Strengths:
  • Qixoni Crystal imbues the wielder with a significant boost to their abilities in the Force as well as adding power and strength to the weapon's blade itself
  • Ultrachrome Hilt makes the weapon resistant to lightsaber damage/breakage
  • Lightsaber (behaves as a lightsaber to cut through most materials, deflect blaster bolts, etc)
  • Biometric Imprint allows this weapon to only be used by the one it is attuned to

Weaknesses:
  • Ultrachrome Hilt if applied with enough energy and heat from another lightsaber will melt rendering weapon useless
  • Water with cause the blade to short out just as it would most other lightsabers
  • Cortosis is its raw form will short out the blade
  • Because of materials used, weapon weighs slightly more than the average lightsaber making quick strikes harder to manage
  • Because of the innate fact that this is a lightsaber, the blade will have difficulty slicing through various resistant materials such as beskar, phrik, Nighthunter bone, etc.

Summary of Changes
  • Affiliation changed to Aitir Korsa to [member='Nasosûtoi']
 
Good Morning, [member="Aitir [COLOR=inherit]Kor'sa"], [/COLOR]

I'll be reviewing your submission today and this is a neat little lightsaber sub, there are just a few housekeeping issues I'd like to bring to you attention now.

You have failed to provide links to both the image source and the canon link. You also didn't provide a link to Qixoni Crystal.

Your description of the effects of the crystal is a near perfect copy from the wookiepedia page, if you could just re-write it in your own words as well.

Please tag me back when you've made the adjustments and I'll happily pass this through.
 
[member="Runi Verin"] | [member="John Locke"] | [member="Zef Halo"] | [member="Vigil Rostu"]

Submission ready to be moved to Technology Creation for active judging. Just changed affiliation
 
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