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Approved Tech Dasu'r b Jalyr - The Demon's Coat

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a personal Beskar'gam for Soloman Priest.
  • Image Source: Here.
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Primary Source: Mandalorian Armor
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

[*]Affiliation: Soloman Priest
[*]Model: Dasu'r b Jalyr - The Demon's Coat
[*]Modularity:
  • Various Aesthetic Changes
  • Slow Modifications done over time for tactical purposes.

[*]Production: Unique
[*]Material:
  • ​Fabric: Duralumin ​Armorweave w/ Titanium Ballistic Mesh Inlay
  • Armor Plates: Carbonized Beskar Carrier Plates w/ Duraplast Lining
  • Misc: Various Computer Components │ Various Metal Accents

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose Beskar'gam
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances:
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Extreme
- Kinetic: Very High
- Lightsabers: High
- Sonic: Average
- Ion: Low

SPECIAL FEATURES

[*]Helmet


[*]Back Plate

[*]Hands/Wrists

[*]Shoulders
  • Retractable Baradium Rocket Launcher

[*]Boots

[*]Combat Harness

Strengths:
  • The Demon's Coat
    Like many beskar'gam before it, the very nature of the "Dasu'r b Jalyr" is that of war; from head to toe, it is lined in various high qualities materials that impart upon it as a whole the resistances to stand up against blasters, disruptors, slugthrowers, verpine shatter guns, ion weaponry, and even the dreaded lightsaber, so long as it hits in the right spots. That which holds up on the field of battle, the beskar'gam of Soloman Priest is nothing to shake a stick at, on par with Mandalorians many times his age, but not many times the warrior.

[*]Tactical Options
  • While the armor has a variety of options for every situation, it brings full bore the reliability and tactical options of a Mandalorian on the go. From slicing droids and backup computers, to deployable droids capable of offering covering fire to a reasonable degree, and various other elements; the very nature of the armor allows an almost unstoppable amount of tactical fallbacks in any situation, making the armor capable of running solo or with a group in all battlefields and operations.

Weaknesses:
  • Ion/Sonic Division
    ​While the primary, critical options for the suit are well protection by combat deionizers, any of the tactical options on the exterior of the suit suffer the chance of direct ion interference, capable of wiping out the various droids onboard, slicing computers, and any outside contact the suit would have otherwise had. Even stronger blows can disable the interior workings of the suit in its entirety, even killing its wearer should the exoskeleton's microservo motors go into overdrive and snap bone. In addition, while the wearer's ears are protected with sonic compensators, any strong sonic presssure could bypass the suits lining and plates and kill the wearer with enough force, something not compensated for in its otherwise well put together design.

[*]​Lightsaber Be Gone
  • ​While the armor itself has a number of resistances built into it to resist the likes of Jedi, Sith, and anybody claiming the tag of 'Grey Jedi', it's protection is limited to certain areas, while more fabric lined areas are fully susceptible to direct lightsaber strikes; at most able to resist glancing blows or single direct strikes. Pushing these limits will leave the wearer missing an arm, a leg, or various other body parts should they run the risk of pushing the stalwart defenses of the beskar'gam.


Description

Dasu’r b Jalyr”, The Demon’s Coat -

The name was given to the armor based on Soloman Priest’s name, a name he had received after being accused of murdering a fellow Ori’ramikade during his time with the organized Mandalorian clans. The Dasu’r, as he’d come to be known, holds a harsh reputation among Mandalorians; and his armor is no different. Built far more modern than many equivalents, the Dasu’r b Jalyr holds innumerable utilities added over the years - not far from the conventional Mandalorian armor, but its utility is on par with notable versions wielded by Jango Fett and Jodo Kast.

Its high tech nature gives much of its credit to Jaeger Solutions and Aegis Systems - from the holster and boots, to the sensors and targeting system. Various slicing, protection, and recon droids cover it - and allow for immediate force multipliers in most situations. Its cutting edge nature however, comes with a darker side - it is notoriously susceptible to ion energization; and once its shield is used up, it can lose the majority of its systems and droids; making it no more than a regular beskar’gam, which in itself isn’t a bad thing, but certainly worse than what it was.

As far as customization, the armor is painted a black to signify Soloman’s own need for justice - though this isn’t regarded by most that see it. Symbolizing his need to see his own justice against those that falsely accused him of the Ori’ramikade murder years prior, and the various bounties he hunts now - but in truth, he almost never actually wears it anymore. Often, it is a showpiece for him to stare at in a drunken stupor, and consider the times he had lost.

A mandalorian depression of sorts, it would seem.

When it isn’t spending time as an expensive, culturally significant dust collector - it is by far one of the most dangerous armors in the Outer Rim; something Soloman takes serious pride in. Its a shame, for him and the Mandalorians who helped him build it, that it no longer sees service in all but the most dire of times.
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Soloman Priest"]

Hey there. Forgive me if I cut to the chase and give you the fast and dirty review, I think this is a fairly solid submission and only needs a few tweaks to get it where it needs to go.

Soloman Priest said:
Manufacturer: Soloman Priest

Since you extensively use Jaeger Solutions products in this submission, I think its worthwhile including them in this section. Normally we would ask for proof of purchase of the closed market items, so this would also save you the awkward step of having to ask yourself for permission.


Soloman Priest said:
Material:
Fabric: Duraplast-Weaved ​Armorweave w/ Titanium Ballistic Mesh Inlay
Armor Plates: ​Carbonized Beskar Carrier Plates w/ Duraplast Lining
Misc: Various Computer Components │ Various Metal Accents


Please can you link these materials with their respective wookieepedia entries.


Soloman Priest said:
Weight: Average
Resistances:
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Extreme
- Kinetic: Extreme
- Lightsabers: Very High
- Sonic: Average
- Ion: Low

You're coming in very high on your ratings - three over by my count - so please can you adjust accordingly here. I've included a screenshot below the spoiler to give you a rough idea of where the oversteps might be. I also highly recommend using this spreadsheet here if you need help with this.

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Give me a tag once these edits have been made and I will make a second pass.
 
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