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Approved Starship Deliverance Class Corvette

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Image Source[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]http://img12.deviantart.net/0ae3/i/2013/047/e/c/sci_fi_fighter_bomber_2d_commission_by_adamkop-d5v58yl.jpg[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] [/SIZE]
  • Approved Keshiri Driveworks Customers
[SIZE=14.6667px]Manufacturer[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: Hoersch-Kessel Driveworks, [/SIZE]Keshiri Driveworks

[SIZE=14.6667px]Model[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: Deliverance Class Gunship[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Modularity:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Bomb Loadout[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]On board weapons[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Shielding[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: Limited[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Material[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Durasteel Frame[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Double Layered Quadranium Plating[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Reentrance heat layering[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Ion Reactor Core[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Heavy Transparisteel Viewports[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: Picket Corvette[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Length[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 35 Meters[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Height[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 15 Meters[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Width[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 50 Meters[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Armament[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 18, (10 bomb bays and 10 Laser Cannons)[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]10 Bomb Bays,[/SIZE]
    [SIZE=14.6667px]20 Heavy bombs [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]40 Standard bombs[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Or 80 Thermal Detonators.[/SIZE]

[*][SIZE=14.6667px]1 Top Mounted Heavy Laser Turret (2)[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=14.6667px]1 Belly Mounted Heavy Laser Turret (2)[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=14.6667px]1 Tail Mounted Heavy Laser Turret (2)[/SIZE]
[*][SIZE=14.6667px]2 Flank mounted Rapid Laser Cannons (4)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Defenses[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 12[/SIZE]

Hanger: None

[SIZE=14.6667px]Special Features[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Cupholders for all Crewmembers[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Four Ion Engines[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Ray Shielding[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Particle Shielding[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Three month rations supplies[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Solar Collection panels for energy.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Three Week Air-supply[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Atmospheric converter (To enable replenishment of the air supply on planets with an atmosphere)[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Undercarriage landing struts.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Advanced Sensor array[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Standard comms array[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Two high powered lights (For night time atmospheric flight.)[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Standard Hyperdrive[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Standard Targeting computers.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]Maneuverability Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 10[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Speed Rating[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 10[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Hyperdrive Class[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: 3[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]1[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] strength of this submission.)[/SIZE]
  • Dropping the payload - The chief feature of the Corvette, besides its smaller and odd shape, is the payload it carries. Designed to fill a role that a bomber cannot, this ships is designed for mass destruction of an enemy force or stronghold at a much closer range than most space based bombardments can achieve, or that a bomber squadron can hope to cause on the scale of damage. This means that the Corvette is more often designed for atmospheric bombardment unlike commonly seen.
  • Cloak of Cannon Fire - The Secondary weaponry, those being the several blaster cannons and turrets on the ship, are meant to provide ample anti fighter destruction. This is done in order to create a further superb air superiority support vessel able to operate in atmospheres. Covering a wide arc of fire, it can cover itself and land forces relying on it for over.
[SIZE=14.6667px]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]1[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] weaknesses of this submission.)[/SIZE]
  • Expensive - If there is one thing fallback for the craft, it is the expense. Operating one requires a crew of 12, operating the turrets, piloting, navigation, comms and numerous other functions as well as the payload itself. Capable of (At its fullest) carrying in twenty large bombs means that operation of one alone is about as such a cost as two full squadrons of bombers, that of which can be transported by other craft and not rely on their own power to get to a location.
  • Speed - Its speed is laughable, nearly twice as slow as a bomber, and slower than most if not all corvettes, the ship is a not meant for getting into a place and out like would be expected. This ship was designed for extended atmospheric use, thus making its use in space combat less impressive considering that frigates and some cruisers can even keep in time with them.
  • Maneuverability - Similarly to the speed, the ship is not meant to spin and turn on a dime like bombers are. Its mean to hover and glide in with little to no changes in its direction unless necessary or to move to another location. Thus making it a large target easy to follow with a turbolaser from a frigate or cruiser, and making it all the more easier to track with a fighter.

[SIZE=14.6667px]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: (Describing your submission's history is [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]optional.[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]There is no requirement for amount of words here[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your special features.)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]The Deliverance is a twelve man crewed Corvette meant to support group troops and cause precise and massive destruction on targets with its payload. This singular fact has reduced a Cargo to little more than its bombs themselves, as well as the rations and other necessary provisions. It also boasts no room for a passenger count of any kind, making it unsuitable for transport of troops or anything pertaining to a strike force. It retains a size small enough to it into a hanger ONLY in emergency situations and must travel under their own power otherwise. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]The Crew, that of twelve people is also a necessary fact of this ship. It is crewed by the following list of members.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Pilot[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Copilot[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Bombardier[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Comms Officer[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Navigations Officer[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Rear Gunner[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Two Flank Gunners[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Belly Gunner[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Top Gunner[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Fire Control Officer[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]And Medical Officer[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]It also can hold enough supplies (Not counting emergency supplies) to undertake extended missions, allowing them to move independently of fleets and work on fringe worlds without the need for transport to that world. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Its shielding, a dual layered system with an outer ray shield supported by an inner particle shield is done in order to protect it ffrom ground based weaponry and small assault crafts. Boasting stronger armor as well the bomber boasts and above average defense but only among those of its class and those below it. When compared to some frigates and most all cruisers, the shields and armor would barely hold up against them in any normal situation.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Another special feature about the ship, is its size. Unlike most all Corvettes, this one is able to land in most starports as it more closely resembles the size of freighters instead of most Corvettes. This creates a craft that can land in far more places than most other corvettes, allowing it to resupply in more locations and be repaired in most locations without restricting the repair of other craft. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]The only feature further out of the ordinary is an advanced sensor array, done in conjunction with the desire of a long reaching craft that could operate on its own for an extended amount of time. This is done in order to help it avoid unnecessary conflicts and correctly identify targets to ensure the missions are carried out with the maximum efficiency. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Development Thread:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] If needed[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]Intent[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]: To create a ship based on the real life B29 Superfortress, complete with heavy armor and weaponry but slow speed and maneuverability with resources large enough for long term missions. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Who Can Use This:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]First Order[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Pentastar Alignment[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=14.6667px]Approved Buyers[/SIZE]
[SIZE=14.6667px]Primary Source:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px](Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)[/SIZE]
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Solan Charr"]

neat image. :)

so you will need make the defense rating 10 to balance out the increased armament rating.

optionally you can change the speed and maneuvering to 10 and defense to 12

or do 20 posts of development for the boost to armament. and keep the standard specification levels in the other fields.

just a note, in actuality it is only 7 defense weapons not 14.
 
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Did this suggestion.



Reshmar said:
optionally you can change the speed and maneuvering to 10 and defense to 12
Also, broke down why i thought the Cannons all together equalled 14... which apparently i could not do math yesterday because they only equal ten.... between that screw up and my massive screw up in the other one, im seriously worried about my ability to math.
 
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