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Approved NPC Denzul Vosh-Sularen | Sularen Association

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To codify Marlon Sularen's Older Cousin and an Important Official in the C.A.B
  • Image Credit:
  • Role:
    • Chairman of the Constitutional Council of Ministers
    • Senator of the Beshqek System
  • Permissions:
  • Links:
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 39
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance:
    • Height : 6 Ft
    • Weight : 165 Lbs
    • Facial Features : None
    • Hair Colour : Black
    • Usual Clothing : Standard Imperial Uniform [Grand Moff variant]
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Denzul Vosh-Sularen
  • Loyalties:
  • Wealth | Extremely Wealthy : Being the Head of Government of the C.A.D and the Planetary Senator of Byss as well as being a close relative to the Lord-Imperator of the C.A.D , Denzul Vosh-Sularen is extremely wealthy having a net worth equivalent and potentially superior to other wealthy aristocrats in the Core Worlds such as the Tagge's.
  • Notable Possessions:
  • Skills:
    • Skilled Diplomat
    • Experienced Statesman
  • Personality:
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      Calm
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      Diligent
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      Trusting
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      Patient
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      Ambitious
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: SIB-14 Stun/Ion Pistol
  • Combat Function: Given his position as a Diplomat and how he has been involved in his Younger Cousin's Troublesome Schemes , Denzul Vosh-Sularen has received simple military training for self-defense in case of Assassination or Kidnapping Attempts having average marksmanship skills when using his personal weapons. However despite this training he often prefers not to pick a fight and prefers to choose diplomacy over conflicts using his personal weapons only as a last resort.
Strengths:
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    Grey Eminence | Is a Skilled Diplomat and is a master at various forms of Diplomacy
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    Fortune Builder | Is an Experienced Politician , holding considerable positions within the Constitutional Authority of Beshqek
Weaknesses:
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    Flamboyant Trickster | Isn't good at behind-the-scenes plotting due to his tendency to be Honest and Sincere
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    Misguided Warrior | Has little Military Experience as a Soldier of the One Sith Military and isn't familiar with various military tactics.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Born on Duros as Denzul Vosh , Denzul grew up as the ambitious Cousin of Marlon Sularen with the cousins maintaining a close relationship throughout their early life despite the fact that they lived on separate planets. When the One Sith took over Corellia and Duros , Sularen having already joined the One Sith as a simple collaborator coerced his Cousin into joining his minor band of Teenage One Sith Collaborators dubbed Sularen's Directorate and help him support the One Sith in their efforts in quelling Local Resistance Movements. Eventually the One Sith Movement was defeated and the cousins were forced to flee due to their affiliation with the One Sith and while Denzul aimed to return to Duros to pursue his goals without his cousin , he remained with him as Sularen built the Directorate.

When Marlon resurfaced in 859 ABY , Denzul became the Public Spokesman and did manage to maintain a positive image for the Directorate until his Cousin was sacked by Cedric Grayson and failed to regain his favor a few weeks later over Kuat resulting in the Directorate being labeled as a Terrorist Group. While after Sularen fled to Jakku Denzul stayed with him for a while , he grew to realize how dangerously over-ambitious his younger cousin was and left him retiring to a private life on Duros to wait for a perfect moment to resurface. That moment was when the Alliance formed in 861 ABY in which allowed Denzul to pursue an active career as a Junior Representative on Duros leaving behind his role in Sularen's schemes.

However after the assassination of the Senator of Duros , in the midist of the political turmoil that ensued after the assassination , Denzul was once more contacted by his cousin who somehow managed to convince Denzul to leave Duros once more and join Marlon once more this time as his younger cousin orchestrated as secretive coup against the Ruler of Byss and took over the Planet himself swiftly. As Denzul rejoined Sularen on Byss he was made the Head of Sularen's Government as well as the Representative of Byss to the Senate , though this time as he enjoys the advantages of his new position , Denzul has pledged to keep his brother in check and atleast makes sure he doesn't mess up like he did twice already in his past.



 
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Fevris Derzelas

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Hello! I will be reviewing your submission.

We are off to a good start but there are some thing we need to go over before I can approve this.

1. Permissions
  • The permission listed enables you to use items of minor or mass production, affiliated to The Pentastar Alignment and subbed by Kaine Australis. This permission does not cover the Pentaguard - which is an NPC Unit Sub. I will need you to either replace, remove or get an additional permission for their use.
2. Loyalties
3. Strengths & Weaknesses
  • While the CK3 traits do hint at what this NPC's strengths and weaknesses are, people who are unfamiliar with the game might find them a bit ambiguous. I'd suggest expanding on them a bit so that it's clearer and easily understandable.
4. Historical Information
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Fevris Derzelas

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The link you added is in the Permissions field and directs me to an Amino page, while the image used is there, it does not credit the original artist.

I did a search for you and found the original art here, please link to this instead in the Credits field.

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