Approved NPC Deran Meran

[Kami Meran]

Name: Deran Teran Melana Kolla Meran
Loyalties: Mandalorian
Role: Clan sister on the Meran Clan
Development Threads:if needed
Age: 17
Species: Valkyri
Force Sensitivity: no
Appearance: Average height thin girl coated in grease and oil. with greasy brown hair.
Deran has relatively low hygiene and prefers to wear the same things. she has a artificial right hand due to a birth defect.

Personality: almost always overly energetic and preppy admits to preferring mechienics to people.
She preferes metal to people offten finding people annoying and unpredictable. as a result she likes to be alone with her work and her droids.

Deran likes to be alone so mutch she has actualu set up a small cot in her garrage she sleeps in an preferes to eat in her work station.
She holds no real allegiance other than to a customer who gives her a job.

History: Deran like most Merans was adopted into the Meran clan as a war orphan ane was raised in the Agogi like clan.
she found combat distasteful but found enjoyment in helping her older siblings fix brokem equipment. as so she set up a small shed and set to work making small items..
as time progressed she began to withdraw from people.

Weapon of Choice: spanner. or whatever she makes
Wealth: none
Combat Function:Mechanic.
Skills: Engenearing and vehcal maintanence
Notable Possessions: cc 33pit droid
Other Notes: Claimes to be married to a pit droid and is adicted to caffien.

Intent: to create a permenant resedent to Mern Mechanics
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91265-meran-mechanics/

 

[Darth Prazutis]

Under Review.

 

[Darth Prazutis]

[member="Kami Meran"]

• Appearance: I need at least a paragraph of information here to flesh out the NPC. There's a lot you can talk about from her appearance, height, clothing choices and armor she wears, just saying average isn't going to work.
• Personality: Since this is a crucial part to who the NPC is I'm going to ask for at least a paragraph or two of information here as well. The personality of a character is a part of its 'meat and potatoes' of who this person is in conjunction with their history. You can explain here how they act and not only use adjectives to explain their personality, and mentality, but expand upon them as well. For example instead of saying admits to preferring machines to people you could go into detail about if shes a loner or if shes shy and possibly why she prefers machines to people, what does it say about her?
• History: I need you to add one paragraphs of history to this NPC. The history section is the second part of the 'meat and potatoes' I mentioned earlier along with personality. It's these two that truly make up who and what a character is. There's a ton you can talk about here from her birth and upbringing with her family, the mandalorian trials and training if she was born into a Clan or if she joined one, how she developed her skills as a mechanic.

 

[Kami Meran]

oops sorry. done [member="Darth Prazutis"]

 

[Darth Prazutis]

[member="Kami Meran"] | [member="Valiens Nantaris"]

Approved Pending Secondary.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.