Desmond's Body glove

[Desmond C'artyom]

Intent: A personal Body glove for Desmond C'artyom
Development Thread: Me Armor

Manufacturer: Desmond C'artyom
Model: Na
Affiliation: Desmond C'artyom
Modularity: no but is worn under heavier armor.
Production: Unique
Material: nutorium and Trakar (Mandalorian Voidsteel)
Classification: multi purpose
Weight: 1.3 kg
Quality:
anti force 5


Special Features: has a thin in lay of woven Void steel wires to fend off force attacks.

Strengths: relay only a partial resistance to force attacks.
decent blaster protection
Weaknesses:
only offers a limited resistance due to the minimum amount of void-steel.,
due to the void steel the body suit needs replaced as opposed a repair.
only no resistance to blasters and none to Projectiles.
Description: created to be a personal body suit and aid in combat by being more light and worn under her older heavier one.
kami used lighter materials and the tiny amount of voidsteel she acquired on a recent acquisition to thread threw out her suit to
resist force attacks even if only slightly.
the suit acts as others though it is skin tight and is worn under better armor.

Primary Source: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/103993-kamis-bodyglove/

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

[member="Desmond C'artyom"] - Unfortunately a large portion of your dev is going to need substantial increase. 1-2 line posts are not acceptable in the Factory for development threads. We typically (though this is not a hard rule, more a guideline) need to see a paragraph or two, at a minimum. Please consult with your posting partner, and do one of the following:

• Remove the voidstone derivative and thus the Development Requirement
• Increase the size of the posts in your thread to something within the above-mentioned guidelines and tag me when done.
• Conduct a second thread that still meets the requirements of the Restrict Materials challenge, but is significantly more substantiative in post content.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

[member="Desmond C'artyom"] - What is the status of this submission?

 

[Desmond C'artyom]

Uh, Scrap it. Sorry [member="Julius Sedaire"]

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Raziel, Braith Achlys, or Cira.