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Dista Class Station

Ayumi Pallopides

Heir to the Emperor, Former Senator of Denon
Terra_Space_Station_HD_1080p_by_TKingArt.jpg

Image Credits: http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/099/d/c/Terra_Space_Station_HD_1080p_by_TKingArt.jpg
Intent: To create a station to observe and Monitor sith space
Development Thread: Magnificent Six
Manufacturer: Baktoid
Model: Oasis MK II
Affiliation: Republic
Modularity: None
Production: Unique
Material:

  • Durasteel
  • Crystasteel
Description: Built and designed by Baktoid Industries for the Republic to monitor and be a small hub in the outer rim regions around Korriban. To watch and prepare in case the sith return, weaponry designed for defense and communications to reach neighboring Republic fleets.

The highly orthodox jedi councilor master Carn Dista was put in charge his resilience to the dark influence something that can steel him in the situations. His work to make sure the tombs and ruins were sealed away with other jedi more important and highly regarded in the council.

Despite what most say this is a battle station designed for defense and attack if need be. Its armaments are equal to a ship of its size with more people and droids who have been battle tested and trained to resist the influence of the planet or its former occupants.

Classification: Dista Station
Role: Observation Station
Height: 1200m
Width: 600m
Length: 600m
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Antimatter
Hyperdrive Rating: 10
Minimum Crew: 6,000
Optimal Crew: 20,000
Armaments:

  • 20 Quad Turbolaser
  • 10 Duel Turbolaser
  • 10 Duel Ion cannon
  • 8 Warhead launchers
  • 10 Heavy Flak Cannon
Hangar:
  • 36 fighters
  • 4 gunships
  • 16 dropships
Non-Combative Attachments:
  • Communications Array
  • Encryption Network
  • Escape Pods
  • Holonet Transceiver
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Detention Cells
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Tractor Beams
Passenger Capacity: 4,000
Cargo Capacity: 20,000 metric tons
Consumables: 5 years
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability:
10 (orbital)
 
As with all things over 1,000M this will need a dev thread establishing its creation or the tech behind it.

I'm also going to ask you to rework your description quite a bit to bring it into line with the guide.
Description
The meat and bones of your ship. A full paragraph is needed here, minimum. If you don’t have a picture, then two paragraphs are required, one detailing the general shape of the ship. Describe some of the history behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. Also include any modularity details in here.
As it is your description mostly only has an outline of the station's purpose with little imagery about the station itself and raises a few large questions. What do people say about the station? Why is Carn Dista and his work mentioned, is he the station's commander? Please also note that without an image we require another paragraph devoted to the shape and form of the station. This is also a good place to put in any little details you'd like to add.
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Hmm, nice image.
As it stands your description still needs to be a bit more about the station itself and please @tag me when the dev thread is finished.
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