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Approved Tech DM&S-125 Flamethrower

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CEO of Dalness Manufacturings
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a flamethrower for the TodHusars Corps
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  • Image Source: here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Borderlands 3
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Flamethrower
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Average
  • Ammunition Type: Fuel
  • Ammunition Capacity: Low (about 20 seconds of continuous fire with one tank)
  • Effective Range: Average
  • Rate of Fire: High
  • Damage Output: Very High
  • Recoil: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Protected fuel tank place
  • Pressurized Nozzle
  • Blaster rifle-looking shape
STRENGTHS

  • Lightsaber-resistant due to the Cortosis
WEAKNESSES

  • Useless in non oxygenated environments and ineffective in bad weather conditions.
DESCRIPTION

This flamethrower, built by Dalness Manufacturings & Shipbuilding, is made for the TodHusars Corps. Due to it's average weight and it's rifle-looking shape, this weapon is easy to handle in many situations.
 
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Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala
The amount of fuel tanks is limited due to the fact that the TodHusars carry multiple weapons and ammunitions
This isn't an acceptable weakness for a weapon. This is reliant upon the specificity of the one group that may use it.

Weaknesses that can be accepted are ones such as Backdraft from wind or weather conditions. Not functioning under water due to using materials that cannot burn in a non Oxygenated Environment.
 
Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala | Vora Kaar Vora Kaar

Alright, we've got a few things to look at before I can stamp this.
  • As is, this submission is three points overbalanced, please adjust accordingly. You may, for instance, raise Recoil to Average (which is usually considered quite manageable for the average combatant) and Weight or Size to Heavy/Large.
    • Since you're new to the Factory and indeed the site, pay close attention to the positive and negative values next to the ratings in the spreadsheet I posted - you can use it yourself by downloading it in the Technology Templates, should you so desire.
  • I don't buy "about 3 minutes of continuous fire with one tank" as Low ammunition capacity for a flamethrower - most IRL variants have a capacity of around ten seconds while Wookiepedia lists "five shots" - neither are anywhere close that. Please lower it to a more reasonable number or avoid concrete numbers altogether.
 
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