Do me a critique (bio)

[Vosh Mozh]

Would appreciate it if a couple people gave me input on my first character!

 

[D'vok Windroamer]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjUqUVrXclE

 

[Jsc]

[member="Vosh Mozh"]

Looks good.

Some tips,

• Weakness: Seduction - This is a strange weakness as, there are still plenty of undesirable people and aliens in the galaxy. And you're still gonna want to say no to them. Lulz. Nothing worse than waking up next to a Hutt, if you know what I mean.
• Weakness: The Force - This is a good weakness if it's going to be permanent. However, if you plan on just working around it eventually? Might want to drop it entirely and go with something new.

Everything else looks fine. Great place to start.

 

[Vosh Mozh]

[member="Jay Scott Clark"]

Thanks for your input! I'll make some edits based on your advice.